Reviews for The Not-So-Private Mind |
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luigi207 chapter 3 . 3/1/2016 IT'S *GASP* THE BOREALIS |
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2015 Btw, u made a typo. You wrote DEI (doofenshmirtz evil incorporated) as DIE. Lol, it would be funny if Doof set up his company as doofenshmirtz incorporation of evil, lol. |
A chapter 1 . 7/26/2014 Ah A the Human. How unreview. By unreview. I mean...completely review! |
itslikepoetry chapter 1 . 2/15/2014 You write the characters so perfectly! Especially Major Monogram, Doof, and Karl. I read thier lines in thier voices because you were right on with the characterization. Loving this so so much! Best PnF fan fic EVER! |
Kale Bishop chapter 2 . 6/14/2013 Well I kinda like the plot but the story's too formally written in my opinion. When did Ferb get those anti mind reading devices anyway? XD. Ferb's becoming a little mean towards Phineas :(. Well I can't really expect anything big at the beginning so I'll just read on. |
Ninjee chapter 4 . 6/4/2013 I'm kind of dying snickering to myself because dear God this exactly what would happen. Phineas would panic, Ferb would think he was an idiot, and Iz would be hopeful/disappointed, lol. And the Doof voice is awesome. I'm reading every line as him. |
wshpd chapter 9 . 5/30/2013 Excellent story, in every respect. It's a classic sci-fi cliche, especially in fanfiction, but it's cliche for a reason - because it always makes for a great story. The same is true of the body-swap, and I'm sure in the hands of a great writer like yourself that story will turn out great too. The ending was funny, and I initially thought by a sequel you meant continuing that storyline with Ferb, but I agree that wouldn't have worked - apart from anything else, he already understands people so well, hearing people's thoughts wouldn't make much difference to him! |
Random Guest chapter 9 . 5/11/2013 Hey! I never get a chance to read long stories chapter-by-chapter, so I usually wait for weekends and then read the whole thing when it's complete...so... Yeah, I know, I'm way behind. I loved the story. Writing from Phineas' point of view is so hard for me, but you do it perfectly! The next one sounds great, too. Sorry I couldn't read it sooner! |
MassiveSinger chapter 9 . 5/10/2013 Wow! I can't wait to see what will happen! (This will be a mess, won't it?) |
hera98 chapter 9 . 5/10/2013 Yeah can't wait |
AmyNChan chapter 9 . 5/10/2013 lawl! I see something fun coming soon! at least very confusing. XD |
writer-person2 chapter 9 . 5/9/2013 It's funny that Ferb now has mind reading powers :) Your next story sounds interesting |
Whythis chapter 9 . 5/9/2013 Oo. Excitement bubbling. This sounds good... (P.S I like Flip Out Friday) |
Axis29 chapter 9 . 5/9/2013 *Sigh* another story about swapping bodies ... the only thing I see that's wrong with something like this is ... I've been considering writing one like this for a while but wasn't sure if I should do it or not. Either way if you are writing this then I should probably put mine on hold for a while, on the bright side, I will be able to work on one of my hundred other story ideas that I have. |
MassiveSinger chapter 8 . 5/9/2013 Poor Ferb! This made me laugh! |