Why do you have to do this to me. My heart. Good grief. This ripped my heart in two.
Keep up the good writing! :-)

This is sadly reality. Why is it that only children are seen as needing protecting?

Thanks for writing & sharing.

I really like this story. It made me cry. Do you think you could make a story off of it. I think I would be great. I'm not sure what you would call it but I think you are very creative and know that you can come up with one. I'm only 13 so I can see why you wouldn't want my advice but I still think I would be great.
Thanks,
Bre

Stop making me cry. It hurts.

dear god that was depressing...but you do make a very valid point in which people keep to themselves and dont reach out to those that need our help. The entire time i read this, it reminded me of a situation similar to this, but not as extreme. I really wanted to reach out to the lady who was crying, but i felt very nervous and thought I might make it worse...so i did nothing and watched as she walked by with tears in her eyes.

If only there where more Guardians that helped the older, like teenagers and adults. That would be awesome.

Oh geez. I have shivers now, that was pretty thought inducing. xP It just makes me never want to grow up. But denying the inevitable can only go on for so long.

It's really good ;3

Woah, I never expected that to happen. Poor Jack...

Omg you are an amazing writer! I felt so sad when I read this T-T