So an OC with Naruto's name? I hope that at least the plot is good.

Missed opportunity to make his exceed named Kurama.

Technically Precht (Hades) and Makarov are blondes, then there's Mavis and Yury.

Oh and I would suggest changing Sora's name, because 'Sora' is Japanese for 'sky', not a suitable name for an ORANGE furred Exceed. I would either call him 'Tora' meaning 'Tiger' or 'Kurama', you can also use 'Yoko' which not only means 'Demon Fox' but is also a Japanese name with 'Ko' meaning 'child' and the 'Yo' can be translated as 'crystal', 'ocean', 'sunny' (good name for an orange cat), 'willow', 'beautiful', or 'bewitching' (another good name for a cat capable of shapeshifting), depending on which kanji for 'Yo' is used.

Also I would suggest making the Exceed female and possibly pairing her with Panther Lily later on since Happy and Carla seem to be an item.

Oh my god! Are you fucking kidding me?! ANOTHER NaruErza story?! And you somehow think that would be a GOOD pairing?! Even if you kept Naruto as is in terms of personality, Naruto would NOT work with Erza! Her personality is too overbearing, she's too prudish, Hell, even in canon, her relationship with Jellal is so forced it's painful to watch, and the only reason it works is because canon goes from bad-ass Wizard Saint Jellal to 'Erza's bitch' Jellal so fast it makes someone with split personality look sane! No, no, no! And Erza is too overdone, 95% of the NarutoFT crosses have this pairing!

THIS story had potential because it was one of LITERALLY only a handful that had Lucy in the pairing and the ONLY one with Lucy as the exclusive pairing and not part of a harem with the exclusion of a single ONE-SHOT! Why fuck that up to jump on some cliche bandwagon?! I don't care if you make this a harem, add other girls, BUT PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, THIS SIGHT DOES NOT NEED ANYMORE NARUERZA GARBAGE! It's not just the fact the two fit as well as fire and ice, but it also does a disservice to Erza, because the ONLY way you can make the pairing work is to make her completely OOC. Erza is a proud and strong warrior woman, she's a lot like a Knight, like Artoria from Fate/Stay, if you make her act like a blushing virgin, it kills the character they've built up, that's why her scenes with Jellal are so horrendous that I completely avoid watching them, like in the episode where Crime Sorciere helps them unlock their 2nd Origin, that beach scene with Jellal and Erza was just... HORRIBLE! It was as bad as Naruto coming back from his training trip and the usually ass-kicking Sakura going "What do you think Naruto? Do I look more womanly?" while blushing and playing with her lip... give me a damn break!

You should stick with what you've got, revise it a bit. From the sounds of it, you plan on making a story where Naruto's from the past like the other Dragon Slayers? Then it would make more sense to pair him with Lucy considering it was HER ancestor that took them to the future and HER mother who sacrificed her life to open the gate, I'm pretty sure that would make Naruto feel indebted to protecting Lucy.

The only flaw this story had was the teasing hints of Naruto's past with Mirajane, I would have much rather it been a small harem with Cana, Lucy, and Mira due to all three girls being so close, the idea of them sharing a Dragon Slayer seems plausible (Sorry for people who hate harems, but add in the fact Fairy Tail is based in a seeming 'feudal era', and the character's are Dragon Slayers whom take on the attributes of Dragon's to the point they pretty much ARE Dragons in human bodies, I'm pretty sure a small harem of HUMAN females is not out of the question)

Naruto x Lucy is more unique than say Naruto x Erza or Naruto x Mirajane. Personally I think it's better if you stuck with the original idea and then overhaul everything you dislike about it. And I think starting a few seasons into Fairy Tail would be good. Like with Gildarts' return after the 100 year job he failed. With flashbacks in the beginning of each chapter or something. It's just an idea I haven't seen a lot of people use lately. Good luck and I hope you're coping well in our current situations!

I would say, start from the birth of Naruto and keep the pairing Naruto x Lucy. Not only is it a good pairing, but it is also one you don’t see often. Most of the times it’s either Mira or Erza and while those pairings are good, they are far too common I think.

When you start posting the new story, please keep this one online.

The story so far with Naruto being Laxus younger half-brother is good. However, instead of having the same father as Laxus, it should be a different one since the reason Laxus mother left him was because of her husband (Laxus father) because of the horrible things he has done. She fell in love with another man a few years later where she then given birth to Naruto. His mother, Tsunade, from what you wrote down would tell him about the stories on how she used to be a Fairy Tail wizard before leaving because of her previous husband's evil actions.

You then continue with the story on how Naruto being raised by a dragon and learning the Dragon slayer magic like Natsu and the other 1st generation dragon slayers. He would then travel to Fairy Tail where he would meet Macruv and meet his half-brother, Laxus.

After that, you can continue the story as you see fit to make it a Naruto X Erza pairing. But first make it a Naruto X Mirajane since they did have a relationship before the two got together. Plus, Mira could use the former relationship to tease Erza a bit.

So small... Didn't have any development between Naruto and "his" dragon, just a giant time skip... Feels like the dragon just existed to give Naruto dragonslayer magic -".

naruto x ezra some many of this pairing is abandoned

id say keep it naruto and lucy but write a new story with naruto paired with erza

a naruto x erza pairing with the flashbacks

Annoying you describe Laxus as an older version of naruto with all blonde hair. Smh I hate when authors do this like give him his own look. Laxus is ugly af and judging by this pairing , anyone attracted to Naruto would mean they are attracted to Laxus since they “looks so much alike” gross af I don’t even wanna read this any more

Naruto x Erza and update bitch!

By myself, I'd like Naruto Lucy because I've seen just a few fics about this couple. NarutoxErza I wouldn't like because I prefer JellalxErza, actually. However, you already said you hate Jerza, so I'd like SimonxErza. Maybe you could put more flavor with some couples more, like NaruroxCana and NaruroxUltear, like it was NarutoxMirajane before NarutoxLucy. But the real couple, for me, it would be NarutoxLucy