Reviews for A Testament of Things that Never Will |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you come back some day. I've read hundreds of stories and this is one of the best. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really wish I didn't start reading this since its probably not gonna be finished. But, this is honestly one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Very well written, original plotline, captivating dialogue, you really hit everything spot on. In the odd chance you end up writing more, I'm really looking forward to it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() why'd you take away Narutos sage mode? hes been nerfed too much, I can understand taking away Kurama but Sage mode is a Naruto staple. Now I understand why he cant even defeat an A ranked missing nin. But I have to say you write some pretty sweet combat scenes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How is it that future Naruto cant even defeat Zabuza? he should have wiped the floor with him no problem, Zabuza is only an A-ranked missing-nin right? No wonder the future Naruto is from turned out so horribly if he cant even beat Zabuza what chance would he have against any of the Akatsuki let alone Madara or kaguya. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the hard work love the story _ Please don't drop _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read through all this in a single day, it was awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() it would be nice if future ino could return to yuri |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey man/ woman (you never know these days). You should consider updating this story! It’s a really good one and it’s a dashame that it’s been discontinued |
![]() ![]() ![]() You may have set up the scenarios, but you usually know the best thing to say. Wonderful job. It's just a shame that this story was abandoned to long ago. You put much effort into it already and I appreciate everything this far. Thank you |
![]() ![]() This fanfiction was amazing.I hope you will add more chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn you for making a fantastic story and then abandoning it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked Yuri's talk with Sasuke. |
![]() ![]() I like Yuri, i do, and i like that u do get him to come across as quite wisened most of the time but there is one thing he says in this chapter thats flat out wrong. He says that finishing the bridge for them would lead to them not depending on themselves. I'm sorry but thats just wrong. They are building the bridge to escape from oppression after all aren't they? And they have been doing that without aid for months? I'm pretty sure they already learned that lesson after all Tazuna is an old man not a child. Not to mention they live on an island that would require a certain amount of independence from the start. Dont try to force the wisdom in future yeah? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well it’s a shame that this story hasn’t been updated in such a long time it is one of the better time travel fics I’ve read |