Reviews for Dominatrix - revenge
Cupidineum Amorem chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
This had some of the best smut I've ever read. Your creativity is amazing.
Tokala chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
how could I have missed this?! Damn... so hot! I think the Logan/Eve scene was my favourite! :)
Logan's Honey Pie chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
Took me a couple of days to read it. I read it in parts. I just finished it. Not what I expected but it was really hot.
AddictedToMusic18 chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Holy hell! *dies* best read ever!
DeniseDEMD chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
So that little love me again video gave everyone Logan feels and this is what happens!

Holy hell this might have been better than 50...after all the lady started as a fanfic writer! I'd buy your book, especially after this ONE! Amazing! And hot!'
DeletedAccount00000000000 chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
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...I think. ...You killed me.
You just broke me. I um...well. Um. Hm. I...WOW.
I think I might be dead after reading all of that.
I should've taken it in parts. Like. Whoa.
I'm just gonna bow down right now to your greatness. And your genius. And just WHOA.
Aalskfjalksdjfwoiejfalsfjasldfjaowiejflsdjfaksfjo; iwefjsdfklj - this is my brain. you have done that to me.
And now I'm gonna go take the world's longest cold shower. Because HOLY CRAP.
SprinklzAndPixieDust chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
HOLY FUCKING FUCKSICLES
THIS WAS... DON'T REMEMBER
HOT TO USE WORDS! I UM, WOW!
I FEEL LIKE A LITTLE KID LOOKING AT THE
ICE CREAM MAN, I'M LIKE 'WHOA DUDE, YOU ROCK!'
Ahem, uh... wow. The-the sybian... I swear I didn't
take one single breath while reading the part about the
sybian. Holy Sahara hell! Wow, I don't think a cold
shower will do it. I'm gonna go jump in the arctic now.
CRAZY GOOD! And thank you for the mention!
ABSOLUTELY LOVED!
ValentineZombie chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Oh...my...fucking...gawd...!
O.O
What in the world did I just... Oh me, oh my!
Can I just take a fucking moment to go back over everything I just read and proceed to melt into a puddle of fangirl mush!? asdfghjkl;! Omgomgomg! Yeah, you were totally right, you called it that I might die from this and I think I did! Holy shit... Sweetie pie, you just did a big hit to my poor heart and head, I think they both exploded!
I don't even... dammit, this was not a smart idea for me to read this story right before bed! I'm fucking wide awake now and I don't think I'll be getting a wink of sleep at this rate... If I'm a zombie before my nanny duties start tomorrow [more than usual, of course] I can blame it all on you!
This was all just so... holy shit, it was hot and steamy and sexy and fantastic and amazing and wow and... there are too many words to describe this! Love, love, absolute love! Hell, I thought I loved the one shots, but this one just blew the others out of the water! Giiirl, you know how to work the smut! ;'D
I just have to say each of the pairs'scenarios were beyond perfect! Seriously, you topped yourself with this one, Darling! -hearts-
[can I also just make a little note about how fucking cute it is that Kendall is all flustered and shy and adorable about all of this? Agh, having a quick fangirl moment!]
Fantastic work!
SHY chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Wow...so I'll be right back. I need a loooonngg cold shower after that one!

good job!
TiffDizzle chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Holy motherfucking...idk. You have blown my mind just like I knew you would and this is so incredible!
bombasticbeatsboss chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
I don't know what words are
i think...
i think when i finally go and bang someone...they're just...i'm just goign...going to show them this...and say 'take your pick'
I DONT KNOW WHAT WORDS ARE MY BRAIN IS FUCKING SLAUGHTERED
my god, the boys are evild evious bastards, and of course James is the ring-leader, with you as the ring-leader in getting details from the men
(first, Logan's poor horse dude lol) but...whoa you and james...that was...that was fiery O_O sex on a horse...jesus
then Carlos was SO unbelievable hot. Am I sitting in a volcano or is it just the hotness of what I just read? DEAR GOD (yeah i would so complain about my ass forever, i still complain about it,and i hurt it like 2 years ago lol)
my god, that Carlos part was so delicious, that won't be leaving my head for years.

KENDALL HAD SUCH A SWEET ONE. Well, the area was sweet lol. My god *fans self*

But Logan and Eve.
Mother of fucking pearls.
What words describe that? NONE THAT WAS TOO HOT FOR WORDS.
Logan can rape me anytime he wants just saying, that was super delicious. She got fucked into oblivion!
I've said delciious a lot, but this entire thing was delicious and i'll jusb e sitting in my corner staring at the ceiling because nothing in my brain will function