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   karthik9 chapter 5 . 6/22/2013 It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates. |
| karthik9 chapter 4 . 6/15/2013 It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates. |
| numbers chapter 4 . 6/14/2013 125 billion dead. Not enough. |
| R.C chapter 4 . 6/13/2013 If I may critique this briefly. It seemed like you repeated several words and phrases multiple times, which honestly can be quite annoying. Also, you set this chapter in. A classroom, yet just like the sniper scene before it, there wasn't any sense of dialogue or plot development going on, just exposition dumping. Giving us a character to follow or a story to observe would really add to this. And a minor thought; Peace and Isolation isn't done yet, so we don't know if the planet was totally trashed or not. Hell, it could look even better than it did on the show. After all, Ultramar was hit by the Tyranids and was ravaged by them, but it didn't become a death world. It's actually still a lush world that's still one of the best places to live in the 40kverse. For all we know, the Equestrians are doing what humanity did in Mass Effect- multiplying like bunnies and spreading across the multiverse. Just some thoughts. |
| karthik9 chapter 3 . 6/10/2013 It is excellent chapter I look forward to future updates |
| Tobi-Douchebag-666 chapter 3 . 6/7/2013 Tau Empire |
| Tobi-Douchebag-666 chapter 2 . 5/8/2013 Here are suggestions for weapons Name:Executioner Description:The Executioner is a double edged(look up the trope Double Weapon) chainswordpowerswordenergyweaponforceweapon Both blades are located on the opposite ends of a large circle, it can be spinned at an incredibly high speed and used like a massive buzzsaw. This can only be used by someone with high levels of psychic power. Name:Justice Desciption:The Justice is a combination of gauss, mass effect, psychic, bolter weapons. The recoil is capable of breaking even a space marine in power projectiles do not stop until they have hit their target, even if they are embedded in something else along the way. Here is where I got the ideas look up General Winters Socalo and General Cross Marian |
| karthik9 chapter 2 . 5/8/2013 It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future update. |
| Tobi-Douchebag-666 chapter 1 . 4/26/2013 The reapers are no big deal at all for all those years they've existed they have simply stagnated |
| karthik9 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013 It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates. |
