I hate starting a story, only to come to the end and find it's not finished, should not be allowed to release a story if its not finished

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Good reading

Hi! I love Tiva and I was really excited when I read this. Are you going to write any more of this? I'm really excited and I want to read more. :)

More please
- Ziva DiCosmo

Hey! I loved you fic! Do you think you will write another chapter soon? :D

Update soon

Please update this story again

Fantastic! Please finish the story.

please keep writting i love the way you write

One thing I want in the next chapter is the next chapter.

I'd like it if Vance & Tony had a good relationship, like they do now in Ssn 11. And don't make us wait too long for Ziva to have the baby (a little girl ?) :-)

I love the Tony and Ziva dynamic, and I am so pleased that Ziva decided not to stay in the field! Cant wait to see what happens next... maybe some Tony whump?

I had forgotten that that is written when Eli was alive. Well looking forward to see when you take this story have enjoyed it hope to read much more

Please continue with your story! I'm loving it and can't wait for more. :) Love detailed and emotions!