Reviews for Fledgling and Shadow |
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Lola chapter 9 . 2/6 Wait, we don't even get to see the moment Severus changes back to Snape so we can see Snape's reaction? Right. |
Lola chapter 9 . 2/6 This story completely derailed. So Harry, who is only in fifth year and will spend 9-10 months a year at Hogwarts for the next two years, spends all his money on a crappy house and then leaves the safety of the bloodwards to live there with Severus (after leaving him with Petunia, who hates magic boys called Severus), until June 30th, which is like, two weeks later? What the actual what |
Lola chapter 8 . 2/6 I haven't the faintest clue as to why Harry is suddenly buying a house. So he'll get the house in Godric's Hollow from the ministry when he's 17? Why not wait for that and use the money to rebuild? Or talk to the ministry to see if he can get it back now, if he's in such a hurry? |
Lola chapter 6 . 2/6 Yes, it's really written correctly. Also, canon Snape died at age 38, so I'm not sure how yours can be 39... |
Lola chapter 3 . 2/6 Why all the sneaking around instead of confronting Sirius? The man is treating an innocent (bc as far as they know, Severus doesn't have his adult memories) five-year-old the way the Dursleys used to treat Harry. Just pointing that out should be enough to stop it. Is Harry a Gryffindor or what |
Guest chapter 9 . 11/19/2017 Aww, that was great. Now on to the sequel. |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/19/2017 I highly agree with Hermione. |
Guest chapter 6 . 11/19/2017 Aww, poor Severus. I want to hug him. |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/19/2017 Aww, poor Severus :'( |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/19/2017 Aww, good old Harry. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2017 Aww, poor Severus but cute. I love de-aged Severus. Yes, good old Harry. |
Riya1112 chapter 9 . 10/8/2017 Wow! This was so good. This was really nice. I really liked it. |
Loki Joker Quinn Jr chapter 9 . 12/22/2016 Wow I loved this it's soo good. |
Jissy2013 chapter 9 . 9/19/2016 love it |
magicanimegurl chapter 9 . 6/16/2015 Harry would be a great parent. Sirius should be ashamed. Dumbkes is suspicious. Though Shadow seems to be getting a good start for his independent life. Write on and going to look for your sequel now. |