| Reviews for They Shook Hands : Year 5 (New Version) |
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   Vampireking40 chapter 8 . 8/25 So Pansy is the 5th year prefect. Ok I read the letter to Daphne wrong and it turns out it was Harry telling Daphne he is a prefect which makes more since. |
| Vampireking40 chapter 4 . 8/25 There seems to be a lot of girls making prefect in Slytherin 5th year. First Daphne mention being made Prefect. Then Pansy mention it also. That is two girls. from the same house. |
| DeadFish37 chapter 28 . 5/16 The twist you made at the ministry completely threw me, and yet I love it. Looking forward to seeing his reaction to realising why Laine grew so jealous (if indeed we are attributing it to the locket). Was it purged of Voldemort's soul when it passed through the veil, as happens in other books? On a separate note, are you just ignoring the existence of Harper (in Ginny's year) as Malfoy's replacement as seeker in HBP, or is he going to turn up now? |
| DeadFish37 chapter 18 . 5/15 I wasn't too sure what to think of Umbridge at first, given how much she seemed to enjoy the Muggleborn Registration Commission, but I love the way you've adapted her authoritarian streak to the ministry's changed interests. I'm curious to see what the locket does to Laine. |
| Sleepyhawk502 chapter 28 . 5/14 Great story! |
| Kaeso Corvinus chapter 28 . 3/15 Azkaban is listed by name in chapter 22. A slip or foreshadowing? |
| mumphie chapter 28 . 3/2 Glad that Sirius made it! What direction will the story take? Will Sirius ever get serious about the ladies? Will Harry get over Lane? In an earlier story, Tracy said that they were to be together, was that foreshadowing? Oh so many questions, but I'll leave them at that. |
| mumphie chapter 26 . 3/2 Not sure how I feel about Lane getting snuffed. IMHO she wasn't right for Harry. And, I am glad - so far - that you haven't killed off Sirius. I am afraid to go to the next chapter... |
| JohnGlenn chapter 1 . 2/20 How does Harry have the Tri-Wizard cup? Wasn't it left at Azkaban when he was Apparated out at the end of Book Four? |
| mumphie chapter 7 . 1/18 I hope you don't kill off Sirius or Remus like in canon! |
| mumphie chapter 2 . 1/18 I'm starting to worry over the watch that Theo's dad gave Harry... |
| harryyeradisappo chapter 16 . 1/6 Hell that's salazar's locket you fucking disgrace you fucking gave yoir girlfriend a horcrux i- im anxious |
| Vampireking40 chapter 10 . 8/8/2019 A much different Umbridge then we are use to in other stories. |
| ArkhCthuul chapter 24 . 8/2/2019 Given how long she's been wearing a horcrux, Laine must have the will and temper of a Saint to only get slightly jealeaus. |
| ArkhCthuul chapter 20 . 8/1/2019 Finally. You/he remembered. And still he didn't get the important stuff, like asking about parselt9ngue, or similar stuff. And you let slytherin invent the cruciatus and experiment on pupils. Ouch. |
