Loved this story. It's different from other HP-SPN crossovers I've read, in a good way.

A bit blind-sided by the end but also looking forward to the sequel. Glad it doesn't end here.

nice plot. Harry is really pathetic so far though lol.

I'd been hoping the computer wiz wouldn't show up because that'd make Harry redundant. Fck it, I'm dropping this. It's not worth the frustration.

You established none of this interest Harry has in his Winchester Daddy so I'm skipping it. I don't really care how he changes in your fanfic because his role has only further undermined Harry's importance. Once wizard, then supernatural nerd, now Winchester lapdog. What's this, he hasn't called me? Better drop everything go running!...

I wish you'd made Harry a little cooler. He doesn't need to powerful to be respected, you know? There's been a little too much dismissal on their part and squeaking on his. Seriously, he's been living in a bar full of hunters for years at this point... In what world does it make sense for him to be so meek? Even the canon nerd whose role he's replacing was intimidating in his own way. He knew he could make or break a hunter by choosing whether or not to help.

Idk. The world building is going ok, it's just your characterization of Harry that's disappointing. I don't like him and he's feeling like a doormat.

"He wasn't going to disappoint the man"... ugh. You just met him. He was dismissive, disrespectful. Hell, he has much as demanded your cooperation without so much as a hello. So why are you treating him like you're name is Dean and he's your daddy? It doesn't make sense.

I think you have it wrong about Harry not understanding, after all he blamed himself for the death of Sirius and if Harry had listened to Hermione the circumstances would be highly different.

Awesome

So this was a great read. Very intense. There were a couple oops moments though. He still had his wand even after he got to the US because you said he had it on the John rescue, you had him put the rings back on twice, the second time was better though so I'd just cut the first one. Also, you could go with his wand not working because of the contamination from Crowley, Phoenix feathers probably wouldn't mix well with brimstone or whatever.

Um, Harry totally blamed himself for Sirius dying because he fell for the trap Voldy set up so he does understand somewhat.

Oh, the idea of Crowley getting bit for trying to use Harry's magic is lovely. The idea of Harry's core ripping itself out of Crowley the next time he's anywhere near Harry and returning to him is hilarious. He couldn't do a thing about it because Harry followed through on the deal, he just didn't know his magic would disagree, awesome if that's what happens.

Oh my gosh, seriously!? Try getting sleep occasionally so you have better plans than leave him under a tree. Lol. He really kinda sucks at the Hunter thing and he's sort of lame at the saving people thing without magic. He's gonna get better right? Can't stop laughing for some reason. Under a tree with a note he may or may not notice and he's just gonna drive back to the road house, please say he naps first.

I'm glad I found this finished so I don't have to rant on how's ridiculous it is for the writer of the story that is freely being shared to apologise to readers who tend to bitch more than they say thank you. Still, STOP APOLOGIZING! People who complain and demand updates are jerks. Fun so far, almost cried for how alone Harry is. Really hating Dumbledore, he deserved to die from that damn ring. If Harry has the ring and the cloak still will they work for him?

*murdered

Who vs whom he vs him. "...theDark Lord whom mursered his parents..." should be "who murdered his parents" because the response would be he not him.

That's who I was picturing. knew it was him before I knew it was him