Reviews for Master of Desire, Slave to Lust |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/22 Just awesome. Better than half the romance novels out there that get published. Beautiful writing. Also nice to see ki used as a way to heighten a sex scene; makes sense, super hot, and also grounds it in the world of DBZ in a really cool way. |
CherryBlossom006 chapter 8 . 5/14 OMG. This was f*n hot!. I think I almost touched myself while reading this lol. Loved it totally, the whole master-slave concept was displayed very well. 8 chapters, very well connected and not boring at all. congrats Othe reviews say that you are good with this kind of fanfiction so im gonna check your other stories. |
Movingfeet chapter 1 . 2/17/2018 Reminds me of romance novels. Some light bondage elements. A story that appeals to our baser desires. |
BV4ever chapter 8 . 1/17/2018 Damn...that was so freakin intense! Your writing is sooo AMAZING! Vegeta is a sex god! Your writing captured a compelling persona of Vegeta...confident, sensual, and unrestrained. B/V intimate encounters were so vivid and all-consuming. Your description of their last climax was just pure uninhibited perfection! |
Stephie chapter 8 . 10/27/2017 I can't even describe how perfect this smut is! And that EL James woman makes millions with this shit she is writing. This should be published! So fantastic! |
Guest chapter 8 . 9/16/2017 Simply AMAZING! |
Kitty in the Box chapter 8 . 9/8/2017 This was exciting, extremely sensual, dramatic and vibrant. I love how you creates the atmosphere to invoke such deep passion and wanting. really soaked by this. loved it. |
lovelylovablevee chapter 1 . 6/27/2017 Just finished reading this on media miner and Lord have mercy on our souls... these chapters contains some of the hottest shit I have ever read! I enjoyed every bit this. It was so good... so, so good. |
Guest chapter 8 . 2/13/2017 Wow |
Mars chapter 8 . 1/19/2017 It's been so long. How you been? Miss all your work, came across it again from ladygeets favorite stories. Think I'll re-read all your work, it's been long enough that it will feel like the first time. With a bit of dejavĂș. Can you write a couple paragraphs? For all pending stories? Buffy too? Haha. Nothing lost by asking. |
Guest chapter 8 . 11/24/2016 Wow. Just wow. I wish there was more. |
ladyg228 chapter 8 . 10/20/2016 WOW! this was so good! my favorite read thus far! amazing job! |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/6/2016 Holy. Shit. I can't even say anything else. A masterpiece. |
R. A. Xip chapter 2 . 9/15/2016 I started watching DBZ for the first time just recently and I was afraid I wouldn't find any good fanfiction of Vegeta. This is awesome! Thanks, can't wait to read more! |
gabrielaguaraciara chapter 8 . 7/19/2016 OMG its the stories are too perfect for are limited to English! You permit me to translate them into Portuguese and put them in my Nyah account? |