Oh that was so saucy so early in the morning here! Perfect, and this

You having trouble, Castle?" she asks, breathing the question in his neck, right on that spot behind his earlobe where the flesh is so sensitive that he can't stop the goosebumps that erupt on his flesh, the tremors that shake his body violently enough to stall whatever little progress he was making on her clothes

was just so them, i could here then in my head!
thanks

Beautiful! It ma

I particularly liked this (cos it's so true) "Kate whimpers at the simple contact of his palm around her fingers and Castle feels her whole body tremble against his. He smiles, proud and thrilled and more than a little amazed that, even after all this time, she is so overwhelmed by his touch, that she lets him be the one to make her feel like this."

That was all kinda of amazingly hot and sexy

This is just gorgeous! Sexy and hot and intense, but there's also such beauty in your words, giving the moments so much reverence and intensity. I love how it's filled with desperate need first, how they're teasing, but then it melts into this moment where he worships the woman he loves, admires her beauty, who she is inside and out. Amazing work!

Your writing is so beautiful Beline! So great to read something from you! Love it :)

Uh. Standing in line at this beer event. Rendered invisible by boobs (beer nerds no different from other nerds: No chycks), and OMG. This is wonderful. Lyrical and funny and wonderful insight into them. Soooooo delighted I can claim any part of this.

Wow. That was incredibly beautiful even as it was insanely hot. And that's so hard to do. Beautiful images and mounting tension and this little bit that for some reason I just love the most:

Kate.

He loves her so very much, and she is a work of art. Her body, her heart, her soul.

That's a wonderful way to describe how he sees her.

Holy Smoke, B! That was amazing! So beautiful, such an amazing description of Kate and Castle's feelings for her! I think I'm kinda speechless, my dear!

Amazing bday present, my dear friend! Wow!

Whew!

See, this is a moral tale on the subject of why one shouldn't read M during the work day.

That was stunning! I'm feeling more than a little bit hot and bothered right now. Your descriptions are incredible, and the tension is perfect. You're an amazing writer- I loved this so very, very much!

I might need to excuse myself so I can cool down a little. If you need me, I'll be over there.

Awesome job! :-)

-Lou

Wow! You paint lovely, gorgeous pictures with your words. Thank you for sharing such talent.

Nice use of the English language in this, and a beautifully fiery love scene :)

Wow. The want & desire in this chapter is mind blowing in the essence of these 2 soul mates.

From: the geography of their lovemaking doesn't really signify as long as they are together, a mess of quivering flesh joined at the hips around a tumble of limbs.

To: as if chanting her name in incantation might somehow make up for the inadequacy of his words, for the fact that the strength of his love won't translate.

OMG: Greatest line ever to describe KB or Ms Stana herself: words are imperfect when it comes to Kate Beckett, weak and lacking substance; she transcends language.

Bring on SMUG Castle any day, any time! - Smug does suit him and she likes that look on him. Sort of.

(And) he might not last very long if she keeps letting out sounds of such erotic, melodic pleasure to mess with his sanity. (Yeah, from Stana's sounds in For Lovers ONly, I completely agree with this)

And what he does to her? OMG. Just. Overwhelmingly. Hot. and. Beautiful. and Breathtaking. Thank U

Wow! That was wonderful! Amazing writing. Lovely!

Beautiful! But, I haven't figured out the hidden message! Can you give us a clue?

You are a fantastic writer, B., beautifully chosen words that artfully express all the right feels in this exquisite homage to truest love. I'm sure the birthday girl was more than pleased!

-Katy

Mmmm, sexy!