I love it. It’s very sweet. I don’t feel like we got enough Fili and Kili in the movies.

I enjoyed this writing. It was a bit confusing at times but I still thought it was excellent.

Not bad! Some cute Durin's sons fluff is just what everyone needs!

So happy that both Fili and Kil made it out in one piece. Fili a little more so the Kili (be ca Kili protaced Fili) but it could have been a lot worse, thank goodness it didn't. I'm happy that the rest of the company found them as soon as they relized that they were gin long enough.

Really enjoyed this story! I love how protective Fili is, it makes me v happy. Even the little bit on the pony - That's the kind of quality bromance I'm after (; great job!

*coos*

Tiny!Fili carrying around Baby!Kili sounds like a picture I'd buy. So cute!

cute

Awwww how adorable. That's cute. And yeah, for concussions, you can't go to sleep yet. It's very important not to.
A job well done with this story! You interpreted the characters well and I like the funny banter between Kili and Thorin when they were climbing back up from the ditch/hole/whatever you want to call it.
Great job! Love this story!

It is wonderful! I love how you presented brotherly love between them and how Fili takes care about his brother. I also really like their nicknames: Kee and Fee ;) Good story!

Very well written.

This was a pretty good fic. Better than some I've read. (I'm especially picky with the ones set within The Hobbit's storyline.) But this was not too overly complicated and not too much hurt to derail the quest. And the characters were true to form! At first, I maybe would have liked more detail and explanation about where they were etc. But since this was just a mini-scouting episode, the simplicity of it works. Good job!

Kili's one liners were great, and I thought the way that Fili held him was very cute. It was good, well written with good emotion

Awww how cute::)

My dear this was so sweet! And well written, loved how you did Oin! Very good, hope to see more durins from you soon!

OMG THIS IS ADORABLE! Thanks so much for not over-killing injuries and keeping Fili and Kili pretty damn in character and adorable. Thorin was so uncle-like and Oin's deafness made me lol. Well done! I have a wonderful image of Fili and Kili on a pony together now and that my dear, is rather adorable, thanks. You did a brilliant job! Now I just have to stop watching the Hobbit movies repetitively...but seriously Fili and Kili! So cute!