i can't wait to see what you have in store for the rewrite! :0

... Did you delete the story?

...

WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?!

Alright, back it up. Did I. Uh. Miss something? Because last I checked, this was an amazing story with like thirty or twenty something chapters. Now there's only one?! Did I miss a note? An important notification?

Please inform me! I am lost, Author-Person. Please tell me what I missed so I can wrap my head around this... event. Thank you!

Sokka gets a cool girlfriend? I'd be happy for him.

I love this story sooooo much! Something I want to see though, besides an update (wink wink) is just a bit more Sokka and Dana moments. I feel like the feelings are there for Dana, but just barely there for Sokka. Not like sucking face or anything, but something cute and adorable.

You know what, you're a really good writer. This has to be one of the more realistic 'fell into Avatar' stories. It was nice to read and really refreshing. Dana is a well rounded character, her greed is amusing at times, and I like how she can be selfish, but it still bites her in the butt. I'm also glad she's an earth bender. Most stories go for water or fire, not many land on earth. Though her love for sparklies should have been a subtle hint. XD

I also like that you're pairing her with Sokka, and how realistic that relationship is going. It doesn't feel rushed, and you could taste the friend zone when Yue was around. But I like that Dana didn't hate or nag either, even finding someone else to crush on too. I was sad to find out Mani died, it actually hurt a bit. But I guess it was worth it since grief is bringing Sokka and Dana closer.

Oh! And the characterization! I love that it isn't OOC. I can almost imagine the characters acting the way they were. The fact that Dana wasn't accepted with open arms makes me happy. It's a time of war, plus this girl was a stranger seeking them out, no way are they gonna just open up and say welcome.

So that's it...This was a long review...Hope it motivated you to update...hint.

Okay! So I don't know if I've ever reviewed this story, and if I have, it was long ago. I'm really sorry about that. I enjoy reading this story immensely and never seem to tell you, haha. It's kind of stupid to mention but one of the reasons I really like Dana is because she's fascinated by gems and crystals and stones, you know? And like. I know that's not a good reason to like her (there's plenty others! promise!) but I remember when I first started reading this and I got so excited cause I was like omg! I collect pretty stones and shells and gems! omg! It was such a simple little trait that you added but it was one I connected to right away. I dunno. I sound dumb lmao.
Love this chapter!
And... Oh damn. Not only are you making me ship Dana/Sokka, you're making me ship Dana/Katara. They are so cute together! They woke up cuddling! OMG! My lil heart can't take it. They're so protective of each other. Honestly. That scene where Dana is holding onto Katara as she's being encased in earth is incredible - just imagine watching that in a movie.
Yeah.
I know.
Fuckin awesome.

Some great writing here :) Again, I really enjoy this story and I get super duper excited when I see you've updated. So I'm sorry I haven't reviewed, but I'll try to from now on :)

This is one of my favorite fanfic! I can't wait for the next update! :)

Dude! Duuuuude! Were you trying to scare me to death?! That fight with the general had me heart pounding! Dana was still recovering! T.T Lol But since by the end she still had the energy to be pissed at them, it's good hahaha And awww The moment she shared with Sokka and Katara 3 I honestly don't have any constructive criticism here :o And it didn't seem like it was rushed to me :)

This fanfiction is a true work of art my friend, I truely enjoy reading this fanfiction and look forward to reading your next chapter.

You almost made me cry. If it wasn't for the anticlimactic music I was listening to, I would've. I'm glad everything is going well, and once again, thanks for the chapters!

I've been reading this nonstop for the last few days and I love it. I'm really happy to know that you'll at least finish book one, that's just great! Btw, I also like the way this chapter is written (although I do miss the crazy kinda-fangirl moments). Now there's one last thing left for me to say: thanks for sharing this with us, we all appreciate it.

This is a great story! My favorite AtLA fanfic for sure. I really like the way Dana is, especially her obsession with pretty rocks (I have a similar obsession). And the way she got the Avatar world is creative –the spirit with the silver eyes did scare me at first, though. I hope you keep writing this till the end of the show.

Dana is an absolute riot. I find her very entertaining. This fic is pretty awesome and just as interesting. I love the Dana/Sokka interactions but I enjoyed the Dana/Katara in this chapter. I like how the story is progressing and I look forward to the next update. Happy writing.

I could've started this review off with unintelligible fangirling, but for the sake of anyone reading this I'll try to keep calm.

The update in Dana and Sokka's relationship made me super smiley, and the fact that they'll help each other cope warms my heart.

This entire chapter was pretty heart warming, actually, (except the fight seen and Dana getting stabbed and whatnot, that was pretty scary actually) what with the bonding and stuff.

The amount of injuries Dana's getting makes me feel so bad for her, the poor girl. ;~;

Congrats on getting one hundred reviews! I really love this story, and I look forward to every update. It's just... fun to read, y'know? Keep up the awesome work! :)

Oh no...After two days of reading, I've finally made it to the end...

MAKE MORE, I'LL DIE WITHOUT THIS WONDERFUL STORY! D: