Reviews for Winter's Eve |
---|
Ourgirl94 chapter 1 . 7/30 I really liked this, I hope there’ll be another chapter some time |
allie300093 chapter 1 . 4/19 Awwww this is so perfect in its own way XD Will is extremely relatable. Love how you wrote both of them! :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2017 Wow Will I never knew you could be so harsh... That insult with Daniel though... I bet Halt had so much guilt when Will said that... Wow... Just wow this was intense and beautiful... Such an awesome writing style... |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2017 Woah... Will's insults though... That was harsh Will... |
Ranger-Corpses chapter 1 . 4/5/2017 I was coming to this, expecting a funny fight but this, wow. That was..a fight- a real one. Damn, that was intense. You can always count on Halt though- Will's lucky he's so forgiving as to do that. I've not doubt that he'll be doing double chores from now on though! This was very well written, and I didn't see any typos. |
JRavenTheFangirl chapter 1 . 5/4/2016 I really really liked that |
gh0ster chapter 1 . 6/24/2015 love love love it! |
SuddenlyADog chapter 1 . 9/30/2014 Such a good way to sum up some of what I love about Halt and Will's relationship. It's also incredibly well-written, and I love that it's very reminiscent of Flanagan's writing style, but it still has a unique flavor to it that was never explored in the series. I.e, awesome fanfiction |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2014 This was amazing. Simply amazing. |
peachgloss chapter 1 . 3/1/2014 Awwwwww... *squeals* Father son bonding! |
Sarcastic Rain chapter 1 . 10/3/2013 Haha oh i love there relationship lol |
moniquebowman chapter 1 . 9/27/2013 Aww poor will he did all that stuff and didn't get approval but then he should know that halt wouldn't say anything The Daniel thing was low even for Will but I guess if he was really angry he would use it |
sagelynaive chapter 1 . 6/13/2013 CUTE! :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2013 Always enjoy your writing. I think something went missing, though; at one point Will is standing on the shore of the river/creek and the next he is in the creek. "Knuckles clenched around his collar and deftly tossed him in the creek. " Will had already removed his jacket, so was he holding it by the collar, or Halt? If Halt, how did he chuck Will into the creek? |
ll Kairi ll chapter 1 . 5/8/2013 Awe this was a nice story. :) it's different reading Halt and Will fighting, but I can picture this happening in real. It's life like and I really liked that. :). Is it bad that I started to have the idea that when Will stormed off, that someone was gonna kidnap him? XD I love the one shot and hope to see more from you! Kairo |