AWESOME! THERE IS A FREAKIN LOW LEVEL OF HALT X PAULUNE FICS AND THT ANNOYS ME! I LOVE THIS!

I AM COLD AND HEARTLESS

HOW IN THE WORLD DID YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPY OVER HALT AND PAULINE DAMMIT

I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES

that is beautiful writing
i love it
please write more

This is so perfect. Like, I can't. I can't believe I found a lovely RA fic with good grammar, believable dialogue, and perfect renderings of the characters! You've done it, by Jove! :P I honestly just feel like you've captured the couple perfectly! Great, great, amazing fantastic job! :D (Also, I should really be studying too, so don't feel bad :P).

For some reason I feel this is like a perfect summary of Halt's life in Araluen, well, right up until he got married almost. You skipped across a lot of years, but it didn't seem rushed or choppy, and your descriptions were great! There were a few mushy points, but nothing terrible and OOC for Halt, awesome job

Ahhh you're so perfect. I love you're writing and the way you express and explain you're stories. And as I previously mentioned I'm slightly obsessed with Halt. Just the way he is and why he's like that. It intrigues me. And you showed all of that in this. I'm very excited to see more of your one shots.

That was adorable!

And i know how you feel with school. I am meant to be studying for another three exams (i have done 4 already) and I am on here instead :)