Reviews for The Fight for Namimori? |
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![]() ![]() ENEMIES YOU BETTER NOT HAVE HURT MY TAUNA AND HIS GUARDIANS RETURN THEM THIS INSTANT |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very fascinating story. The rooms, "locks and keys", and overall story are pretty unique (I haven't stumbled upon anything quite like this as far as I remember.) I hope you continue to update because I'm quite curious about the other rooms and what happened to all the Family members (and of course I'm also worried about Josh, Mai, and Jonah and Nagista. How will the others handle the next rooms?) I hope you don't abandon this fic. It's different from what you usually see in a KHR mafia revelation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I love the rooms! And your writing is just amazing! I'm highly curious of what the next ones are going to be like! I feel like the mist one will be filled to the brim with illusions and Akane is going to have a tough time. I'm also worried about Tsuna-fish's and Josh's safety. Are they okay?! Are they gonna be okay? How are the other civilians? Where is Yamamoto? Who is the enemy? so many questions! Anyway, I hope you continue this soon. Have a wonderful day/night/evening/life. |
![]() ![]() I love this so much! The rooms are amazing. I just hope Josh is okay. I mean Mai seems to be getting healed with Sun flames. The baseball bois are wet but okay. Josh was not in a great situation. Though, it's hard to compare whether Mai had it worse. I mean, I wouldn't want to be burned alive and risk a heat stroke nor would I want to be thrown around and potentially break my ribs. But...I also wouldn't want to drown. Still, I can't wait until the mist & cloud rooms. Your story is so amazing and I just- AHHH! Love it! (I'm also worried about Tsuna. Where is my baby boy?!) Keep up the great work. I looking forward to seeing your writing even more~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Spectacular!~~~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope, you update soon. I love the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought M.O.E as in the 'moe' type |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue, :) i like your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() /stares uncomprehendingly Is this real life... IT IS. YES. AN UPDATE. /ensue incomprehensible happiness/ Oh dear, this chapter made me uncomfortable. Not being able to see, what a feeling. I AWAIT FOR MORE. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope that updates soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude. Really love the story. Really glad you updated. So...update more! I'll be reading _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha you're the same as me, I also can't stand shipping an OC with the canon character. Especially if the OC is the main character and he/she will get a harem. Nope, I can't stand it. After all I come here to read about KHR fanfic, which mean it's about the canon character and their bond with each other, not some OC who suddenly appear and become close to all of them. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() The OC is frustrating me, especially this girl. |