Awesome job. Loved this story.

very good! i like who you have Neal stay and then only leave to try to help them.

Nice work.

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I can't deal with the perfection of this story. God it's so perfect.

THE WENDY THING KILLED ME HOW DARE YOU.

Thank God. I was so scared she'd give up the child.

Aww.. I wish this had happened in the series.. or that Neal came with Emma when the curse was broken..

I read this in a few hours! I couldn't put my phone down. I loved the story. Thank u for this beautifully written fanfic

Just read this story over the last few days.
I will admit, there was many times i was not happy with you for keeping Emma and Neal apart, but I assumed you had your reasons and was very happy to find that indeed you did. August was such a douche, I'm sooo glad Neal beat him up, but I wish Emma had gotten a punch in as well.
And I'm glad you kept graham alive and made him like Emma's brother and didn't have them flirt but just be great friends.
And of course her breaking the curse and bringing Neal back to life with true loves kiss was AH-MAZING! Loved it loved it loved it!
I'll admit, there were times while reading I doubted you, I questioned why things were unfolding a certain way, and also I often wondered why Regina was absent for most of the fic. But everything was great, you planned things out fairly well, and the writing was great.
(Thank god there was no Katharine Nolan to deal with in this story, I don't think I could have handled that!)
Anyway. The point here is that this is a great story!

Hey! I loved this story but I thought the epilogue would have been better as a chapter and wrote the epilogue a few years after and they have another kid. But other than that it was a great story, devastated to see it end

Nice ending and nice proposal attempts.

I really regret the show killed Neal off. He has so much potential.

YAY I loved the story so much : D

Wonderful ending !

A nice ending

Great chapter