Alright, first of all, I have nothing against this story. It was very well-written and well-conveyed, for the most part, and I enjoyed it thoroughly. I sincerely hope you will write more in the future.
I just thought it was a tad unrealistic how the other countries were so pitted against America. Again, that's just my opinion, but I felt throughout the story that you were a bit partial to America and his supporters.
I think it's because when I write, I like to be unbiased; give my readers insight into every character's perspective before they jump to any conclusions. I like to make all of my characters flawed in some way, even the protagonist (which is why most of my protagonists have some sort of nasty history at varying degrees.), because how I see it, the villain is just the protagonist who never got a say in their story. I think it was a bit cliche how America kind of played the martyr or patron saint while everyone else (sans Belarus, South Korea, etc.) was portrayed as leering demons.
I am not partial to England or any of the other countries. I do not condone what they did to America in any way. This is just a bit of writing advice that you can take with a grain of salt, because I truly believe you are a flourishing writer and I look forward to any works you may have in store for the future :).
Much love! 3 (Sorry for the ridiculously long post!)

i fucking love america and i fucking love this fic. this is the fucking shit i have been wanting to read . keep it up!

SO AWESOME! I SPOT MY OTP ( AMERICA X FEM! KOREA) IN HERE! MAKE ANOTHER ONE OR I MIGHT HAVE TO KILL YOU 0_0

Plz update, this fanfic is so good -

I strongly agree that all good things were originated from korea..(serious face)...HaHa..just kidding..fem South Korea reminds me of myself, partly because im korean too..

Wait... THE CONFEDERCY!? Completely out of nowhere, but I can't wait for the next chapter.

OMFGI'MDYING-

*Coughs and clears throat* Uhm, yeah s on-
I truly enjoy this Fanfiction! It's freaking awesome and I just might be one of those people who reallylikeAngsty!Alfred/America. Don'thurtmehplease. xD

But honestly, I agree with you. Alfred plays the part of the idiot and as you portrayed him, he snapped. Then, he gets comforted by fellow [ Friendly, nice ] nations. I love this to much. Wonderful job writing this! Keep it up! :D

P.S. Did I see some Prumano there? Did I? If I did, your my new BFF. I'm not joking. I mean you have KimishiBurger here and I'm just- *repeats what I first said*. You basically have some of my favorite pairings going on here. xD

this fits how im feeling right now. its pretty scary, but love thevstory so far.

Good chapter.

I also like AmericaxSouth Korea... but I like BelarusxAmerica more. Just saying. But still you can do whatever the hell you want :)

ENGLAND! I HATE HATE HATE HATE YOU! (in this fanfic)

Good chapter. Isn't Korea a boy?

Wait Korea's a girl in this story? Okay then.

Yay! Plot!

*flails*
Honestly, I don't care about the fact that its purely platonic, the cuteness between America and Belarus kiiiills me!
*flailflailflail*
Aaaaah, update! I need to see more! Pleeeease? D:
Love,
Liondancer17

This actually really cracked me up XD well done comrade!