Enjoying the story; good chapter...looking forward to the next one! Please keep the chapters coming!

well, this is bad. Like really bad. You completely messed up the characters, and defied all logic in many places. However, it is so bad that it is good. It in its terribleness is entertaining.
Take this as a compliment or an insult, but I will continue reading it.

Ah! I’m really excited! This was so good! I can’t wait for the next chapter, even though it may not be for a while. Thanks for writing this!

Such a great story...I do hope you will continue and finish it. It’s really a bummer to read a story through and find it isn’t complete...there seem to be a lot of them...looking forward to more!

Wow this is so awesome! you are a terrific author and I can't look away! I am excited to keep reading. Good job!

oh thank god. JJ is still alive. And Tobias lying to Charles and Foyet? I’m proud of him and worried for both him and Reid. I believe this means we’re coming up on the prologue timeline wise? I can’t wait.

It’s good but I’m struggling to understand why Reid is the only victim in this? Have I missed something? Foyet destroyed Hotchner but it’s like the focus is all on poor Reid? I seriously doubt that Reid would be Hotchners focus in this too; that he’d be able to put aside his more recent trauma and his concern about his family and focus entirely on Reid’s welfare. Particularly when Reid brought this on himself...

You write well. I get that your interests are Reid. It’s really evident in the story. Maybe it would’ve been easier to eliminate the Hotchner-Foyet storyline if you’re going to kind of dismiss its impacts? That way you could keep everything all about victim-Reid?
Dunno?! Not criticism but observations as a Hotchner fan. :-)

I just read this whole story at once. I'm not sure whether that's better or worse than reading it in bits. Perhaps that's why my Criminal Minds stories (well, my brother MoonSilverSprite's stories) are all one long chapter. Although his were originally in multiple chapters.

I'm so happy you updated this! I can't wait to read more!

I screamed when I got the notification that you had updated. And this chapter doesn’t disappoint. So much tension, so many feels. Thank you for not giving up on this story.

I... didn’t expect this to be updated... I’m in love with your story telling skills and your ability to draw out emotions from the characters and the reader. Wow. Well done. I hope to see more soon! Stay safe during quarantine :)

JJ NO! How could you?! Awesome chapter though. It's great to have you back. Out of all of the stories that were left uncompleted, I wanted this one to be finished to the most.

I'm really sad about JJ though. I hope you're just messing with us.

Can't wait for more! I'm also really happy you're doing better. ️

"I promise the next update wont take years"
Me: looks at update date, cries.

I know your A/N said this wasnt going to be abandoned, but if this has changed, I just wanna say that this was sooo good while it lasted. And as much as I would understand if you're just done, I would love to see more!

LOVE THIS! IT KEPT ME ON EDGE!

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THE SUSPENSE IN KILLING ME!

Right now I'm hoping that Hotch, JJ, Reid, & Tobias will make it out okay.

Keep up the excellent work, & I'll be eagerly waiting for the updates.

~xLunaxNightingalexDuskx

One of the few stories I am still following. It might take years to update but well worth the wait. Keep up the good work!