Reviews for Dean Doesn't like his Daddy all that much |
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DemonDean67 chapter 1 . 5/24 Terribly wonderful. Can you make this past of a continued story though. You are clearly A talented writer. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2014 loved it! please tell me there's more x |
Gwynwidlen chapter 1 . 7/20/2013 I literally gasped and shivered when John said, "You'll do as I say, boy, or Sammy'll get it next." Holy mother of crap. Good story though. |
paluga chapter 1 . 6/19/2013 Wow. That was really good. I feel bad for enjoying it as much as I did . But, anyhow, I'd love to see more of this as an ongoing story! :D If you want to write it of course :P However, my one critique is to fix the line spacing; it's all squished together and it makes it difficult to read; just put one more space between each paragraph :P |