Please continue...The story is so nice D:

Er, did Luffy just get smart? Oh well, GREAT story

What, Zoro's becoming sweet xD

Er, same chapter as the second?

what do you mean that Zoro attacked Luffy?

Just so you know, if they're still breathing and their heart is beating, DO NOT DO CPR. If they're having trouble breathing due to anything in their lungs (water, blood, etc.) Or are in danger of throwing up while unconscious, turn them on their side, to avoid them choking on said fluid. So those are your life-saving tips for the day. Bye!

Yay updates! Luv ya! Waited for ya

What the hell is wrong with your chapter2?! I am totally having motion sickness now oh kami *gag*

Well, at least we now know how they got where they are. Once you're finished with the fic, maybe you could move this chapter to the front, so that any new readers could read it in chronological order. Just a suggestion.

nawwwww! pls don drop the story! i srysly luv it! update! update!

please don drop this story! i luv it! i wonder what will be the next punishment when zoro or luffy gets the answer wrong! i love this story line and think that maybe luffy and zoro were enemies before coming here or somethin. this is the longest review i've written! this shows that i luv u okay! pls don drop the story and pls update quickly! im dying to see another chapter!

PLS dont drop this i luv it!

Woot! You're back! :D I'm happy to see that I finally have another story to follow this summer!

Alright, so now after that...heh, intimate chapter, I'm excited to see you picking up where you left off. I like the interactions you have between the Luffy and Zoro, though I'm surprised you decided to make Luffy the smart one (i,e, how he's solved most of the problems and think about/bring up important topics) and the emotional one (i,e, more self aware and overall more emotional), and Zoro the encouraging (i,e, comforting and hopeful) and more passionate one (he took the 'lead' after all lol). In all honesty, I don't see how else you really could've made them in this sort of situation (could you imagine how quickly they would die if they were their regular idiotic selves? OMG they would fail every challenge XD) and have them survive things, so I'm totally okay with it :)

I've always liked were this was going, so I'm thrilled to see you picking up on it again. I hope to see you update again soon! :)

So, until next update, then! :P

That was a great comeback smut action. Thanks for not dropping the story I look forward to what happens in the future. Consenual ZoLu so wonderful!

Whoa, long time no see! Welcome back. And thank you for updating. None of my other followed ff have updated in weeks! And I'm following like, 75 or something other fics. But Lolz all I could think while Luffy and Zoro were being "intimate" was what the paper watching them would think. Or if they even remembered.