Kyaaaaaa

Kyaaaaa! That is soooo hot! I like how kaito kept on saying "mine!" Sooo cute!
U have a few grammar mistakes but that doesnt ruin the overall feel so its fine xDD
My first time reading a hakubaxkaito fic and its more enjoyable than i thought lol

hi there! I absolutely love this fan fiction! it's so sweet! I love kaishin and kaihaku! your writing style is very good, too. and the love szenes are great, I know stuff like that isn't as easy as it seems(at least not to me...)!
if you still want a idea: kaito x saguru/shinichi (which one you preferand Aoko or somebody walks in on them... (yeah, kind of easy idea... srybut combined with your writing style...)

This was hot, cute and awesome!

D'awww, so cute!

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AWESOME! I do think Saguru and Kaito is a nice pair.