Reviews for Rin's Wrench
Neleothesze chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
...And wouldn't Obito have turned out at least a bit more sane by not having to watch his teammate stick his hand through Rin's chest. _
ivyspinners chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Eee, Rin fic! Yeah, the plan was a bit... weird... wasn't it. So A for this story existing.

(If only she'd ACTUALLY LIVED in canon. my feelings)
bells-mannequin chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
The thing how it should have happened. Seriously.
Well done and thanks for sharing! :)
Unlimited Power chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
I liked the idea of this story, though I don't believe Rin (or anyone else) would stay so calm and rationally thinking after a demon was sealed in them. Also I think it would be more awesome if she just went back to Konoha like they planned and foiled their plans by preventing the release of the bijuu, effectively stealing it from the idiots who gave it to her.
sandydragon chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
This does seem cooler than what happened in the manga. Besides, medical ninjas are supposed to have great chakra control? I doubt Rin would lose control of a bijuu easily. Come to think of it, she could have made an awesome supporting character if she had lived. At least in this Rin got a more decent death. Now we just have to hope Obito doesn't have a sudden change of heart. If he does that, I don't know how much worse the manga could get.
CreatorsOfWorlds chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Thank you so much for making yet another mind-blowingly ridiculous idea just a little bit better with your fics. If it had to happen at all, I'd rather have seen Rin doing something like this.
Cavallo Alato chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Oh my gosh...wow, Rin just...
Nailed it. You totally nailed Rin being awesome. This is still heart-breaking, but it's epic all the same.
treavellergirl chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Oh revenge is sweet.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
wow. Rin owned them. She died, but she took them down with her. Her last words were badass and beauty.
Two things Two things. I think the entire point of their plan was that the seal would break when they wanted it too, like by saying "KAI" or something. It was never about hoping she would lose control. I think. (They never pointed it out.)

Secound, I wonder how Isobu felt about all of this...
Sage of Wind Dragons chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
I think they developed the seal so that they can FORCE the BIjju to be realeased at a time of their chosing and then it be like a fuse going off once she returns.
or you know she wasent supposed to know about the bijju in her stomach (unfortunately for them as her teachers student she probably knew Kurshina and knew how to recognize it a bit)
they probably made it so she coudlent commit suicide by herself witch is why she needed Kakshi as well.
not as stupid as youd think, incrediably reckless and all.
but you remember the bit about the bijjus dispassinating for a while when the jinchurinick dies? before it reforms?
so yeah theres that.
Winter Tiger chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
That was really good! And I love how Rin is being so awesome. There aren't enough of those fics...
starryisnomore chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
You go Rin! :D
mndstjohn chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Hahaha! Good girl!
Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
mmmm yeah ,its be badass
Daughter of Mother Gaia chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Um, oops? Seriously?! Talk about selective blindness. Yes, let's pick up a random Kohona shinobi, stick an all powerful demon in them, return them to Konoha and hope they destroy Kohona. Is instants of Too Dumb To Live.