it's very different from what i read in the books of the lord of the rings, never been able to read all of the Hobbit, sadly i kept loosing the book when i was trying to read it, didn't get past when they were still setting out but it was very different in tone from the movies.

She watched? Ew! I wished you had ignored her and focused on Bilba and Thorin

This was soo sweet and once i started it i just had to finish it. I t was so heart warming.

Oh my gosh. I'm about to cry. It was sood. I'm happy Petunia got her happy ending. I actually thought she was going to fall in love with a dwarf. Its was so good. I loved stories where Bilbo or Bilba is "barren" and she goes with the dwarfs and she falls in love with Thorin and , guess what, she ends up pregnant. something I never understood is why do they never questioned the husband, they always just assume that is Bilbo's fault. what if the husband just couldn't get her pregnant I don't get it. But I loved your story. It was so good. I was actually hoping that when Bilbo would get pregnant again, and I knew she would that it would be a boy so they could have 4 girls and one boy. But it doesn't matter the story was so good. Continue your magnificent work loved it!

Excellent! I really enjoyed the story!

I lovvvve this!

Sqweeeeeeeeeeeee! OMG OMG OMG That is freaking AWESOME! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Whoo hoo! Muwhahahaahahahahaaa! Not a smart thing to tick off the Queen of Erebor. XD And in this case revenge was best served H-O-T. lol

A very enjoyable read! Well done, I love that Bilba is a bit badass and a total queen of dwarves!

you version of them is hot

I absolutely loved this story! You write beautifully! Thank you for sharing.

Thanks for the enjoyable read. Loved seeing this warrior Queen Bilba with Thorin and family.

Such a pretty story! Take that, Lathios!

nice story

WOW!
I like this warrior queen of a hobbit!
And 4 daughters...well 5, WOW!
Will Thorin ever get a son?
I hope there is more!
And I LOVE how the dwarves see Bella as a mother/sister!
And those little dwobbits are so CUTE!

Think you might make a prequel? I like to read the full story of your version of the Hobbit. Keep up for good work. :)