This is my favorite DBZ oneshot. The last little bit gives me shivers every time I read it.

...Year of the full moon and a monkey/werewolf mix...

Grin!

Loved it. Very well written with excellent vocabulary.

wow i reeally liked the story and how you portrayed the saiyans were different then anyone elses good creativity keep up the good work _

Very kool, good ideas here, and makes me feel less sorry for the tsufuru-jin that were destroyed.

Oh my word... that is so cool. As a biologist, I love the whole genetic engineering thing. Nice... _

excellent. effin excellent. this is (s'far s'i know) a completely new way of looking at the spawning of the saiyan race - the tsufuru-jin bringing it upon themselves - sheer brilliance. i liked the little bit at the end about the werewolf, an a/u explanation for the saiyans' affinity with the full moon. great stuff.

cheers,

-shella

very, very, cool. i love your view/interpretation on how Saiya-jins 'came to be.' maybe you could extend this into something more (?). Wonderful piece of writing.