Reviews for Late Night |
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Zela Night chapter 2 . 5/28/2018 Why was Yukio mad enough to break Rin's tail? |
NeonEmoness chapter 2 . 5/27/2015 So...Yukio only got mad at Rin because he was worried Bon was gonna hurt him? |
Rinlover1 chapter 2 . 2/13/2015 u have got to make more it is so adorable! I apsolutly loved it. you can find me on wattpad. |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/21/2015 KAWAII! 3 3 3 love the ending 3 3 3 |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/4/2014 Really good chapter u should keep going |
8bitagent chapter 2 . 11/28/2014 This was so cuuute I absolutely loooved it! |
Natsuki D chapter 2 . 11/10/2014 YUKIO KUN IS CONFUSING! I loved this fanfiction _ Also... if u have time... could u maybe add more chapters or make a sequel to it pwease *puppy dog eyes* Thanks for writing this story _ |
NOTSOFASTKAIBA chapter 2 . 10/21/2014 Yeah, so this was amazing. |
Sora Arashitori chapter 2 . 6/27/2014 YAY! thank you! It was great! Sora |
Jodac chapter 2 . 6/12/2014 Well shit, I thought I reviewed this already but I guess not after recently going through all 8 of them here. 0_0 All in all, this is a very good twoshot. No one's really OOC, it's actually a believable scenario (or "scenarios" plural, rather), the dialogue/plot/settings are all great, and both lemons were quite well-written. I guess my main complaint(s) would be on a bit of the spelling/grammar and the shortness of both lemons, but both of those things are honestly more so just me nitpicking, so... yeah, whatever. XD Anyway, once again, nice job with this! Keep up the great work! ;) |
RainStorm2122 chapter 1 . 5/4/2014 Great fic I've the entirety of it and enjoyed your choice of plot. But there is one major issue... Blue in 日本 (Japanese) is Ao not Au... Au has three different uses depending the kanji used and neither of them reference the color blue. Just thought I'd let you know that you don't have the name of the anime right. じゃまた。 |
Yume Sekaii chapter 2 . 2/10/2014 And I nosebleeded toward the end. Nice! Very well written for a fanfiction and nobody was really OOC. You did a good job and the smut scenes too! |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/21/2013 This was so cute! I love these two so much! :D |
Panda Master X chapter 2 . 9/14/2013 Say whaa?! He let it go just like that?! Whoa...anyways, uh, i really loved this second part! It was so great! I just hope it doesnt end here, but thats on you! Lol, good luck! |
Panda Master X chapter 1 . 8/2/2013 Yayayayayaysyaytayayayayya! Please update this! It sad oneshot, but I really hope you do keep going and make another chappie! Ooo, it's be really good if you made it a threesome! Ohohohohohoho! |