Yes! Finally another chapter on my favourite Hannibal fic! I'm really curious to see where you take this, and how closely you're going to follow the canon plot. I'd love to see a deeper look into their relationship once he really starts losing his mind and she notices. Update soon :)

loving this :) can't wait to read more

Love it!

Please update soon! It's great!

this is amazing! i really like how they meet, and it think it relates very well to the characters and the oh so subtle friendship they have. in the words of my favorite doctor - fantastic! :)

I love it

This story is just perfection so far. Can't wait for the next part, I loved this chapter :)

This is great! I really feel like these characters are very true to the characters Thomas Harris/NBC originally created. Not to mention, the events unfolding are quite cute :)

This is so awesome! I love how spot on Alana is, and how tentative you've made Will, without getting rid of the cynicsl edge he has.

Great job so far, and I can't wait to see more.

Love it! Update soon please :-)

brilliant

Cute

Typo in the second paragraph, second word.
I'm really liking this beginning. Their relationship is so intruiging to me and this seems like the perfect humble beginning. Alana's dialogue is very fitting to her character.
I'm excited to see where this goes! Please keep writing.