Too many refuse to acknowledge bigotry and Prejudice is still too rampant within the police. That is why for quite some time I have come to believe that our police should be made up of individuals who are of mixed-race families. Not just one race or another. As for me, I am from a mixed racial family even though it may not look like it. Since that have been very few times where my entire family is together where people can see that fact. Even though my family is largely European but not solely. We have Native American in us. Some have African Americans in them such as one of my mother's little half brothers. I have Cousins who are part Filipino. One of my uncles my mother's other little half brother is half Jewish/Hebrew. I have another cousin who is half Japanese. And others who are part Hispanic. So yes I hate racism and bigotry since it affects my own family.

When dealing with Government leaders Especially Monarchs it is best to be harsh and straight forward in their failings end that the absolute power has corrupted them. And Odin us corrupt. And the People of Asgard are not honorable no matter what they think. Being a warrior/soldier is not honorable no matter what anyone says it simply turns people into murderers plain and simple. And those who have an actual conscience regret what they have done and suffer PTSD. Those that do not have or suffer such things actually get a thrill out of killing and since of power over others disgusting. That is why their are those who absolutely refuse to serve in the military and some are even getting to the point with the level of corruption within our police refuse to even serve and join because of to many becoming trigger happy monsters. Plus their are still to many 00

THIS is what should have happened! Thank you. And if ever decided maybe another one shot of Thor joining Loki wherever he is

Honestly, this was so satisfying for Odin to be called out for his bad parenting by Thor. I love seeing stories that make Thor a good big brother because I really think he would be!

Editing my comment below, you never actually said that it was a two shot, sorry for that! (Still this one shot is as wholesome as a hundred shots if u ask me XD)

Dang... that’s pretty... wow. I know you said in the summary that this was supposed to be a two-shot, but the first chapter is so damn strong it could do just fine being a one shot. Excellent writing, you delivered everything perfectly. Lots of love to Loki and a round of applause for Thor.

Wonderful story! Absolutely brilliant!

This is beautifully written. Though I dislike bashing-of-Odin on principle, it is done very well - believably - here. I love Loki's trickery and Thor's conviction, in character, but just that little bit more to lead us to a satisfying conclusion. Good fanfiction.

I fucking loved this ending, seriously great job!

This is brilliant! It's what SHOULD have happened.

Wow this is really good. Nice story. Poor Loki, all alone.

Woah... simply, woah. This is beyond amazing.

Wow...

Very good. I rather enjoyed that a lot :)

Loved this!