Reviews for Forbidden Fruit |
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BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 1 . 5/20/2019 Poor Harry...so many years of being brainwashed by the Dursleys has left so wrapped up in bows he doesn't know what to do with himself when it comes to his sexual awakening. I feel for him...I really do! ;) Amazing bit of writing here! You have mixed the Potterverse with realistic struggles over teenage sexuality just brilliantly! |
lemsv chapter 1 . 3/16/2019 Nice ending! Hilarious! Good story and well written. I just wish there was a sequel ;-) Thanks for sharing |
CaptainYellow chapter 1 . 10/23/2017 Really well written, good portrayal and hilarious plot (plus some lemon). Too bad it's just a one shot but I guess this is what makes it so good. |
GorgeousGinny20 chapter 1 . 6/11/2016 Please please please update soon! Please tell me it's a story not a oneshot! Please! This story is amazing! I love it! Please update soon! |
nayin17 chapter 1 . 7/7/2015 Funny and sexy |
LadyGuilt chapter 1 . 7/1/2014 I loved this. This was simply amazing. Great job! |
Thescarredman chapter 1 . 2/19/2014 A couple of years back, I had reason to ask a member named TOW Gunner for a look at an outline for a story I was writing; although he had no stories on his page, he was aformer Iraq veteran and was likely to have the knowledge I needed, if he could share them and if he could express himself. He generously agreed, and provided me with an analysis that was succinct, clear, and insightful, as well as a number of suggestions. I remember thinking then, "This guy should write something." I see now that I was never more right in my assessment of another writer. This is really an amazing first story. I can't believe you don't have a body of work somewhere else. It's a stylistic and grammatical marvel, truly, and speaks of a thorough understanding of the world of Harry Potter - and of teenagers groping their way towards sexual awakening. |
MariSkep chapter 1 . 9/5/2013 Oh God, Harry. Believe when I say I can sympathize. Jerking it to a friend's sister who's younger than you and a few rooms over makes you feel like some a MAJOR pervert. |
blacktag189 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013 Ahhhh...the second half. The yin to my yang. The Harry to my Ginny. All is right with the world now that the world gets to behold the awesome that is your half of this tale. So glad you drunk dared me to write it and couldn't be happier that you finally did too. Congrats! |
Andie chapter 1 . 5/17/2013 This was hilarious! xD i Loved it! Please continue |
Tuesday chapter 1 . 5/16/2013 You should try to expand this story or something. It was really great. Well written and had this relaxing, fun atmosphere to it. Anyways, it was really amazing; and I enjoyed reading it. Kudos to you! You're writing is truly impressive! :) |
mwinter1 chapter 1 . 5/16/2013 Awaiting more |
yanakin1 chapter 1 . 5/16/2013 Great story and well written. I hope to see more. |