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Aihime1231 chapter 21 . 5/25
This is so hard TT_TT
Aihime1231 chapter 18 . 5/25
Ch18: Well, now I know why Marco was fine for Sabo to be around Ace.
Aihime1231 chapter 14 . 5/25
I am very intrigued. It's so curious how Marco seems to be so suspicious and cold around the terrified Luffy but somehow Sabo was alright in Marco's book even though Sabo stated he considered what Ace did as unforgivable. Also, Sabo and Luffy knew each other and Sabo seemed to care an awful lot about Luffy still so why was it that Luffy was allowed to live so miserably - smooching food off of friends, starving to the point of stealing from jobs, constantly worrying about where to scrounge up rent money? Did they lose contact with each other somehow? Was that it? It's so curious!
Aihime1231 chapter 8 . 5/25
I know that this is an AU and in this AU, Ace apparently did some horrible things to Luffy and I don't know the whole story but I did feel bad when Marco told Luffy not to hurt Ace. I mean, it's Luffy who's clearly more terrified of Ace than it is the other way around. But, no matter how horrible he may have been (and to Luffy no less! oh, he did indeed try to kill smol baby Luffy multiple times in canon but like Ace did eventually become one of the best brothers there are), I just am NOT used to anyone badmouthing Ace. Ace is- he's just so precious and deserves the love and he's a treasure, but okay yes, this is an alternate universe. I shut up.
Aihime1231 chapter 5 . 5/25
Luffy sounds so- so pitiful. What'd Ace do really? But, right now, I'm more worried about Marco hitting Ace twice on the head so far, once with his shoe and the second time with a tray. Honestly, go a little easy on the amnesiac, man~
Vongola10 chapter 21 . 6/2/2019
Please continue with your story I love it
Petit Rouge Cerise chapter 21 . 2/27/2019
First i was like , i will it later and later and today i was like hey why not ... i read it all and i f*ucking love it! Its to interesting and i wanna why the heck ace has a gun?! Please please please updatei wanna what’s happening next
fanficmochi chapter 21 . 11/9/2018
Pls update
Guest chapter 21 . 7/21/2017
Please update'
Fukato chapter 21 . 2/19/2017
I really hope someday this gets uploaded
Guest chapter 21 . 1/9/2017
I love your story! Why did you stop?
Em chapter 21 . 1/9/2017
Your story is great! I'm wondering if you are going to continue the story? I'm serious about what Ace did to luffy. I hope you keep writing this story till the END.
Em chapter 21 . 1/9/2017
Your story is great! I'm wondering if you are going to continue the story? I'm serious about what Ace did to luffy. I hope you keep writing this story till the END
SweetLittleRaven chapter 21 . 8/10/2016
Maybe a typical amnesia story... But an epic and very good one ! The idea of the devil drug is awesome ! I'm glad you have added it. Why this gun is here ? Will we see Dragon ? Will Luffy have some power ? So much questions and I can't wait to read the answers...
Thank you for writing such enjoyable story.
Killer-Sangwoo chapter 21 . 7/10/2016
I hope you update this!
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