Reviews for Fluttershy's Mansion
XLR8 The Fox chapter 6 . 8/9/2015
This is my favourite story yet, great job, keep up the good work
Fire Marshall Bill Burns chapter 1 . 5/29/2015
How did Spike get the map from Twilight and not get captured?
Fire Marshall Bill Burns chapter 6 . 4/29/2015
Missing scene: Discord's visit
Discord hears about Fluttershy's mansion and pops in to greet her.
Fire Marshall Bill Burns chapter 2 . 4/27/2015
Fluttershy is a good friend to save everyone from Luna's 'insane' self.
Fire Marshall Bill Burns chapter 5 . 4/21/2015
I think the jar ghost is a breed of octopi based on his appearance, and was the final picture the 'gold' rank
Fire Marshall Bill Burns chapter 3 . 4/21/2015
Is Nightmare Bogmire's cousin?
hopefulheart108 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
I love this story.
hopefulheart108 chapter 6 . 10/12/2013
I like it. I wish I can do something like this, but I think that would be copying you.
Tenko chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Other than the grammar, this looks very promising.
I recommend that you fix those errors as you find a better grasp on the language.

It seems a bit rushed, but then again, so was the original game...
Good work, nonetheless.
Jacob9594 chapter 6 . 6/12/2013
Love this story. Good fan version of Liuigi's Mansion
Guest chapter 6 . 6/1/2013
Nice job, I like reading this story. I love the Luigi's mansion game, may be you can wright another story that cont this story soon? Man just reading this its like I was playing that game again. May be I should, lol. Any way keep up, and have fun doing it too. Oh and sorry if some of my typing on some of the words is spelled wrong I have trouble with some of those sound the same words.
tony feliciano chapter 5 . 5/25/2013
that was awesome and funny how discord head was on backwards i laughed my butt off oh can you make fluttershy's mansion 2 please?
tony feliciano chapter 3 . 5/19/2013
that was awesome please make more chapters
VocaGirl chapter 3 . 5/19/2013
Keep going! This is good.
BlowholeGuy24 chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
Please leave King Boo be in this story. I love K. Boo. And please leave all the boos the same. anyway, i heart this story.
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