You have a true talent! This was absolutely wonderful! I enjoyed every chapter. I would watch this as a TV spin-off or movie. Congratulations on such a wonderful job! This will definitely be a re-read for me!

I don't normally like stories that bring new characters. But I have to say, I absolutly loved this. Sarah and Michael are great. Loved how you brought in all the others. And I really Claudia. Excellent work. I'm sorry to see it end.

Like seeing Claudia coming into her own. Overjoyed the Regents were put in their places finally.

I have to say that I really love how Claudia has grown and matured. It is a delight to see.

I would suggest you change a word in one of your strongest sentences in this chapter. In Claudia's speech, you used the word "options" when I believe you meant "opinions."

One last suggestion for your future writing and everyone else's writing, too, since SO many people have trouble with this. The spelling for lose/loose. A way to remember how to spell the word correctly is this: If it is the present tense of having lost something, for instance, "I lose my keys at least once a week" - then remember that the word "lose" has one "o" in it, just like the word "lost." I hope that helps.

This was a lovely story, and I have marked it as one of my favorites. Even though my preference is Myka/Helena romances, you have shown not only a romance in their family, but also that their own romance has continued for decades. It warms the heart.

Nice little homage to Hu$tle with Bertie. :-)

Wow! Is that an awesome chapter! (ch 12/13 "Legacy")

Great dialogue, great action, wonderful how you have put everything together here. And FUN. Just lovely. Great writing.

I love that you are bringing Sarah and Michael/Mikes together. Bringing the FAMILY together. So wrong that the Regents, etc separated them in the first place.

You have done a lovely job on this.

This is so good for Claudia. I read a fanfic where Claudia felt alone and lonly, because after our WH13 people had moved on, she hadn't the family ties with the next batch. This story allows her that family tie. :-)

I think, realistically (is there any such thing in fiction?), at the VERY least Pete and Myka would have kept in close touch, meeting each other's families, being part of the lives of each other's children. I would have expected the kids to know Claudia, as well. But...this IS fiction, and it makes this story funnier that this did NOT happen, of course. I wonder if Sarah and Michael will fall in love, or if they will have more of the type of relationship which Myka and Pete had.

I am enjoying this SO much! I love Claudia's comments!

This is very amusing, tho shouldn't they know each other, or at the very least know OF each other?

I love this story. Thank you for writing.

Another great chapter I loved it

Awesome you did a great job. Fabulous name for the baby. Thank you for a lovely story. Hope.