THIS IS SO GOOODDD! Why won’t you update this story? It needs loooveeee!
Please update this!

I know its ben 4 years since u last updated this fan fiction but I’d love to read the rest. This is one of the best Okikagu fan fictions I’ve ever read to tell the truth. Hope u will go back to this fan fiction soon :)

Excellent story thanks for writing

One minute I'm sighing, then squealing, then screaming and now I'm drowning in this fluffness. Ahahah I'm so glad there's development between those two! I can't wait what'll happen next!

Still waiting for more
Please continue writing
It's a great story

i just finished read this and i think i like your writing style. It's a good light reading material. please update again. I'm waiting for okikagu relationship progress. may be you can add rival for sougo to push forward their relationship.

Omg I need more pweaseee

Hi there. First of all im sorry bcs im too lazy to login my acc here to review on this so yea~
Actually i'm new in gintama fandom and obviously becoming one of okikagu shipper right from the start. I have read all ur writings though and i think this shall be continue~ lolol this is so annoying that i find this too cute for me to take it w
Once i was wondering though, why angst?

OMG! I was searching for some good Okikagu stories and I find this masterpiece! I've just read all the chapters in no time ~ I'm so in love with this couple and the way you've developed their relationship ~ no hurries and so natural. And of course the Gintsuki parts are nice (but with the twins becomes too adorable :3 ) You're a wonderful writer :) ~ Maybe someday you would want to continue this awesome story. I'll looking forward to it. Regards!

IS PERFECT!
A piece of heaven!
I love the okikagu and the gintsuki!
hehe kagura is a good sister!
Cute, sougo being jealous and possesive towards kagura
i love the way things are going especially between sougo and kagura! Because in the way, they would know more things about each otherr and fell in love later... well in sougo's case his love will become deeper ;D
oh my...the love triangle between gintoki,tuskuyo and hijikata...oh my i didnt expect that!

i really hope you continue with this, so please as long as you don't drop out this i can wait as long as you need.. i'm serious
hope things are going fine to you!
have a nice week!
see ya ;D

i really hope you update this story!

Oh! i wonder what is Okita reaction after he found out the adults love triangle relationship. Especially, one of them is his nephew father!

By the way, Hijikata characters in this story are absolutely changed. And thus, it really sounds interesting!

P.S. The scene when Okita saw Kagura sounds romantic and vivid like I'm watching a Holleywood romantic movie. _

And "strawberry brownie" made me hungry! Unfortunately, i don't know where it's sold, here (I've never tried it before.). -_-

This is a cutest chapter! Especially the scene OkiKagu taking care of babies together!
It somehow gave me a picture of The Okita family in the future (Okita Sougo x Okita Kagura _) .

And i'm really impressive that Kagura hadn't abruptly changed her feeling toward Okita. Thus, the story still continues naturally and it looks real. Good job!

Ha Ha Ha, stupid Okita Sougo!

It's obvious that he's the only one creating "confusing signals".
And it's not his past life actions causing Kagura to hate him. But his performances in this life - being a Tsundere alone!

By the way, i really like the scene when he grasped her hair. It seems he completely fell for her and thus, he couldn't resist himself to touch her once he saw her (in a new and more beautiful look). Wow! It sounds romantic for me! _

And it's proofed in the final part since he already planned to spend as much time as possible with her. He's so tricky! _

What a small world!

By the way, nice narration! Especially bakery shop part. You made me hungry! (_)
And The Sakata family made me feel warm in my heart.

Finally, the ending part (Okita part) is so good! It made me grin and couldn't wait for the next chapter!