Reviews for When The Spark Dulls
McRaider chapter 25 . 4/6/2017
I'll admit I started this story about a week ago and stopped because what Greg was doing felt so wrong, but then I saw it on a rec list and i was like all right, I'll give it one more shot. I'm glad I did. Thank you.
Mrs. Florish chapter 25 . 8/21/2015
I love your version of Mystrade.
Sierra Wood chapter 25 . 9/26/2014
Its bloody 2014! More! update!
Jade chapter 25 . 9/19/2013
I absolutely adored this! I loved your take on Anthea, or A as she was referee to here! Most people portray her just a an assistant, but I loved that you made her out to be a good friend of not only Mycroft, but also John, Sherlock, and Greg. I can't wait to read more of your work! :D
Guest chapter 21 . 9/17/2013
I googled Artiebiba and the only things that came up were reviews and chapters for this story!

BRILLIANT!
The Pen's Lament chapter 25 . 9/9/2013
Loved it, thank you.
HarnGin chapter 25 . 9/8/2013
Though it did end abruptly, I really did enjoy this story. I'm looking forward to reading the one-shot stories, however, especially the Vegas one!

Thanks for writing.
janie17 chapter 25 . 9/8/2013
Great chapter! I think that the time it took for Greg to forgive him was just about perfect for their relationship. Looking forward to the Las Vegas one shot and the final chapter(s).
Phaedra Daire chapter 25 . 9/8/2013
So glad they had a happy ending, I am still looking forward to the one shots. Thank you for writing!
Starlight05 chapter 25 . 9/8/2013
Aww yay happy ending :D I loved this whole thing; thanks for sharing it with us! I look forward to the one shots!
Nolin chapter 25 . 9/8/2013
Definitely ended to quickly, especially since they did not really talk about the reason why Greg felt the charade was necessary. Not only did Mycroft miss his anniversary, he did not even remember it. He did not call in or return calls. Maybe his word is enough. Maybe the scare is enough. I'd like to have seen that fleshed out. Otherwise,the story does not make sense. It is as if the charade was for not or you simply got tired of the topic and stopped writing. The ending is disappointing in light of the rest of the story.
LDWriter chapter 23 . 9/8/2013
I'm really enjoying the stories, keep going please.
beccabrrr chapter 25 . 9/8/2013
I think this chapter is perfect. I loved that the "revelation" was private, and quiet, and tender. I love that Greg woke up held tight in Mycroft's arms, and that the first thing out of Mycroft's mouth was a heartfelt apology. Anything more would have detracted from the perfection of that moment.

You know I would love to have this story continue for...oh, say, the rest of my life - or longer - but I'm just grateful that you've done everything you have. This is definitely going on my list of fics to read and re-read. Thank you, I hope you get some chance to rest after your labors, and then come back rejuvenated.

Also, thank you for all your responses to my reviews! That must have added a lot to your writing time, and I really appreciate it.
IUsedToReadALotBeforeTumblr chapter 25 . 9/8/2013
I think this ended perfectly well :) for these two, a sorry is all that is necessary

I look forward to Las Vegas ;)
janie17 chapter 24 . 9/7/2013
I loved this chapter! It was incredibly cute. I'm not at all surprised Mycroft had figured out that Greg was faking, he is a Holmes after all! Really looking forward to the last chapter
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