Reviews for Busted! |
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![]() ![]() EREN TOPPED! OHMIKAMI- THIS WAS SO GOOD! |
![]() ![]() U do kno ERERI is LEVI X EREN right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was good it could've been a bit longer though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh. O.O |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do not know who is going top! |
![]() ![]() IT WAS FUCKING BEAUTIFUL |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uwahhh uke Levi is so kawaiiiiii *dies* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just dont understand ereri...how on earth could levi be uke? WITH EREN? I mean wtf! Next time make it clear in the summary -_- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is it Eren Y. & Auruo B when it's ErenxLevi? |
![]() ![]() i just noticed the characters. this is an ereri fic, right? but the characters above are eren and auruo. it would be hard for ereri/riren fans to find this if it's eren and auruo. maybe you should change auruo to levi? the lemon was hot, by the way. i've read a doujin similar to the lemon scene here. almost. so hot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa... that took erotica to a whole new level... O.O |
![]() ![]() ![]() Levi, tsundere much? XDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was...heated? Can someone turn the cold air on? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a good smut, but I think 2 improvments need to be made. First is that you sometimes forget to put the periods after each sentence, and second is that the paragraphs are too long! If you fix these in your future fics, your fics will become much better. ;) |
![]() ![]() That was awesome ** |