This is really a fantastic fic. I knew practically nothing about Fire Emblem before reading this yet their dialogue and chemistry read as if it was all your original work and sucked me in. It was difficult to put down lol. The sex was explicit and great too! Really well done.

Wow! Im impressed with the amount of description and the consistancy of the characters. Nice job.

I feel like the fact that I can say that this is almost exactly what I could imagine a scenario where Robin and Miriel have virgin sex feels both like an accomplishment on your part as a writer and a sign as to my own eccentric taste for these kinds of stories. At any rate, this was even better than I would want to imagine and I'm not entirely sure that is a bad thing. Keep this up!

You've done it. You've completely done it. You've read my freaking mind. This i what I was thinking if Miriel ever had sex. Just saying her keen observations while Tharja watches them.

Love it. Lol

Very good fanfiction!
Considering that I'm doing this on my Nintendo 3DS XL makes this a bit hard, but I liked it!
I think that Tharja spying on the two makes it... weird, really. Also, could you make a third entry? That'd be AWESOME!
I also think that Miriel should be a bit less scientific.

It's always the quiet nerdy ones.

*Sully, not Libra. Ugh I can't believe how long it took me to notice that... Though in you're version of Awakening I probably wouldn't want to do it with any of the three, since Tharja is a stalker, Nowi looks and actsa bit child-like and probably isn't mentally ready to do so, and Sully... Yeah, don't think I need to point that out for anyone if you read this whole thing.

This actually made me consider playing through Awakening again and marrying Miriel... Almost... Shame that logic dictates that marrying Libra, Tharja, or Nowi for the best possible outcome...

this is a one-shot? more like a three-shot on one page

This combination requires further experimentation! But seriously though I have to ask out of my own curiousity what kind of appearance does your Robin have? It's hard to imagine my standard avatar with Muriel. Additionally this was a fairly well made story, I think you caught her attitude and speech very well not the easiest character to do that with either. Nicely done.

this is simply amazing

Nice, very nice indeed, brother! Haven't seen an explicit fic this good in some time, hope to see moar! :D

Terrific Story. Good Build up, fun dialogue, very detailed. I enjoyed it, good work

I know nothing about Fire Emblem...but I'm definitely going to look into it now! Awesome job!

Keep up the great work!