Reviews for Eternity in an Instant
TsubasaSyaoforever chapter 2 . 5/21/2009
Aw, tree-san... *hugs tree-san*

Oh my, Subaru does have an incarnation. YES! YEA-EAH!

love it, keep it up!
TsubasaSyaoforever chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
oh my, Subaru has an incarnation
TamChronin chapter 2 . 1/13/2003
Interesting. Fascinating. Unique. It's wonderfully well written and I have never heard of anything like this. It's touching and sad and I just absolutely love it. Wow.
Remalna chapter 2 . 9/8/2002
A sad, but very neatly executed conclusion! *sigh* I guess I'll have to be content with just two chapters...really, an all round great story. I liked how you merged the storyline from the manga-one that everyone, no doubt, knows by heart by now-and gave it your own twist to freshen the characters up. I love the Sakura, she's such a lovely protagonist!
Remalna Marguerite chapter 1 . 9/7/2002
This first chapter is mesmerizing! The Sakura is a fascinating narrator, and I especially liked the way you slowly gave her character depth by focusing, in this first chapter, on the growth of her new-found consciousness, powers, and understanding of the world around her. Also, by using the intimate first person perspective, you allow the reader to be along side her, watching the transformation. Oh, and your writing is excellent. Can't wait to see more.
Eden In Babylon chapter 2 . 9/7/2002
I adored this story. I've never really thought of the Sakura tree in that way before. But you've definitly given it a new perspective in my mind.
ithildin-nin chapter 2 . 9/7/2002
First, your story is VERY good, plus it is an unique idea to write about.

Second, I think you did a good job at writing in the first person perspective.

Third, I, too, cried at the end of your fabulous, outstanding story.

I think you're the first author who explained the origin of the sakura tree and its character.
yamatoforever chapter 2 . 9/7/2002
You really wrote it in a new perspective! That the Sakura had loved Subaru for centuries. I think it so sweet and sad though, that Subaru didn't know about her feeling. And what Seishiro did was a sacrifice that really made me feel so touch. I mean, he did love both of them in the end.
Nightwings chapter 2 . 9/4/2002
The idea is very original, and very very nice. And I love it! A lot! It's so nice _
Subaru Sumeragi chapter 2 . 9/3/2002
interesting story! I liked it!
Creating Myths chapter 2 . 9/2/2002
A love triangle between the Tree, Seishirou, and Subaru. VERY interesting. You didn't antagonize the Tree or make it seem cynical of its guardians' actions. This is a very good fic
Joana Seta chapter 2 . 9/1/2002
Wow... This was astonishing! The story was so very beautiful and it adds that I had never thought of the Sakura that way. I loved the way it compliments with the actual TB and X mangas in a comforting manner.

The song detail was... how can I say? Lulling? It felt nice in the story flow somehow. And I liked specially the way Seichirou reacted to the Sakuras's feelings for Subaru and how they eventually wormmed into his heart as well.

I think it was poietic (no, it's not mispelled. It's a word I was taught in philosophy class that derives from /poiesis/, the Greek word for art as creation in an original sense. _ Neat, hum?)

Well, keep the good work!
Beth Winter chapter 1 . 8/26/2002
Pretty _ I love your take on Tree-san, it's just too cute for words.