Reviews for Scattered Ashes in the Sunlight
Tessive chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
This is so sad but I think beautiful. I will always want Ulquiorra to be with his Orihime. Their sadness seems to be the theme. He only gain purpose in death but I like to think that his old form of void could not contain his new idea identity and so he change and move on to new plain of existence. Still so sad because Orihime she could not follow. But very special words you write. Like a ballad.
Esaint Dracul chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
nice. I like this oneshot. Keep the good work up.
Kur8Kami117 chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
This was AMAZING! I think you captured Ulquiorra's viewpoint perfectly. I also love the metaphors you used to describe Orihime; she certainly was the light in his life, but he didn't realize it until it was too late. :_( You also did a great job portraying the pain he must have felt when he died after realizing he had so much to live for. The last sentence is so sad... At least he died looking at her.
Lehrain chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
This was awesome. I loved it. In such a short story, you really captured Ulquiorra's character. Kuddos for that :P It made it that much more impactful. I've always loved this scene between Ulquiorra and Inoue, and this added that other layer to it. That last thought he had 'I do not want to die,' really got to me. It was just...it sucked. Well anyway, good job. I reay enjoyed this.
The.Teal.Rose chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
Probably going to start reading a few of your stories ;P I've been away too long.

Anyway, this was really sweet. Within so few words you have completely captured Ulquiorra's voice and conveyed his very secluded and very profound thoughts. It's very difficult to reach out to a reader within a drabble like this, but you've managed it. This is a very haunting work and it possesses the same feel which that ultimate scene between he and Orihime did. It definitely inflicted the same level of angst and subtle sadness.

You're a great writer and I really like your descriptions. It's so simple and yet implicit of so much more. Your story is a great representation of this beloved pairing and I applaud you ;)

-Rose
IchiRukiLover chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
It's ulquiorra right? And I loved, loved, loved it! The descriptions were so mesmerizing!
Darksknight chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Again, I dislike first person, but this content it really well written. The pacing was really, really well done. Great job!
Albinos chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Ash...I guess I can understand who is the main character here:))Last sentence is like scream, so desperate because now he has something to lose.