Reviews for Wintertide
WyldClaw chapter 3 . 9/29/2018
that was amazing
WyldClaw chapter 2 . 9/29/2018
the story about the magic paintbrush was awesome.
Nerdman chapter 10 . 6/19/2016
I NEED MORE! I'm really digging this fic man, stayed up too late reading this. I really enjoyed the more light hearted approach the ponies took to saving their friends, a nice change from the fight scene i enjoy. I also appreciated the minimal use of the "sayings" like Spike mixing up his memories for fairy tales or the breezie's little "well do it together!". It's nice to have it just once or twice once. Also so excited to see Honaloo-loo in this story, she's my favorite!
Guest chapter 8 . 9/13/2014
bluddle uddle um dum sung by starsong and the ponies
WyldClaw chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
why did those six ponies do that to breezie blossom?

what is their master's plan
Alex Warlorn chapter 10 . 9/21/2013
The Master doesn't really seem to get the ponies he's dealing with. Even corrupted at their worst their inherent niceness is just too much for them to be truly cruel and vicious!

Is the master Twinkle Wish? But that makes even less sense!

And the master I see is a 'poke the poodle' baddie too at heart. Like he's trying to be unspeakably evil but can't quite pull it off.

"…Wait. How did you know who we were and how to find us? No one else even knew our names! I know because I checked when it first happened!"

And the truth comes out. Except they're too scared and conflicted to put two and two together.

At that moment, lightning flashed outside—a side effect of the mountain's strange weather.

The weather is weird because of Weatherby using her magic tralala, it's not chaotic on its own.

This snake thing . . . it's like one of Pinkie Pie's nightmares.

I wonder what became of Twinkle Wish, the wishing star.

They need to do something for the breezies or they'll starve to death soon in their sleep!

When did the forgotten mention the master to the ponies?

A card? Yep. This is G3.

"I was just at Breezie Blossom, and that mirror melted some of the snow!

WHY DIDN'T YOU MELT MORE OF IT!?

"Now they'll know it's from me. Can you…tell them I said hi…? I can't…wait to meet them…Whoever they are…"

I can't stop gushing how innocent this all is, yet they still can work together!

-Plays Yu Yu Hakisho "Smile Bomb"-

But what the heck is the Master? Where did it come from?

She realized too late that everyone was looking at her.

She walked right into that one.

I always thought Thistle Whistle was blue.

Scootaloo found herself smiling. "Because they like us."

Maybe it's about time they explained the truth to all of them.

The master didn't notice them taking their stuff? Where was he?
He needs to sleep? Interesting.

Thank you for writing this chapter.
Alex Warlorn chapter 9 . 8/28/2013
Wake UP Cheerilee! Pinkie Pie is STILL your friend, and so is Rainbow Dash. And you can be THEIR friend if you just let them!
Alex Warlorn chapter 7 . 8/28/2013
"It is so weird to hear you say Cheerilee," Scootaloo commented,

Typo?

"A game? Sounds fun!" Sweetie Belle squeaked.

I think it's pretty obvious that they're still just kids.

And the utter overwhelming innocent IDEALISM that these ponies can't shake off even when fighting for everything and when they're turned into pawns of evil.

Time to shine Lily.
Alex Warlorn chapter 3 . 8/28/2013
"It's okay, Razzaroo," said Pinkie Pie kindly. "You didn't mean it! And whoever they are, I'm sure we can give them the best party ever to make up for all the ones they've missed!"

Saving the world might hinge on you making good on that promise.

Spike stared. "Yes, I know. You've met me before."

HEHEHEHH!

"She?" Spike exclaimed.

"She?" Spike exclaimed. "Quick! How do I look?"

Cheerilee blinked. "Birthday pony? And started with what?"

Is that GENUINE surprise, or part of the performance?

"But we need to make up for all the birthdays you've missed, Cheerilee! Please?"

THAT ONE should at least hit home SOMEHOW. Willing to make up for all the birthdays they've missed? WIthout a second thought? Even if they aren't questioning why she's in their birthday book to begin with.

"Let's play along for now. Then we can catch them offguard!"

You disappoint me Cheerilee.

Cheerilee . . . this isn't you.
Alex Warlorn chapter 2 . 8/28/2013
THANK YOU VERY MUCH! I'd have never found out about the existence of Friendship Gardens if not for you!

Storybelle's face was solemn. "I can't be certain," she said, "but it's a possibility. Every story, no matter how fantastic, has some truth to it."

Technically there are ponies who just make stuff up.

what I thought was a legend…is true."

THe way it always is in these stories. And that's what it manages to make it original flavor in spots like this.

Ironically, in most places, they really does feel like the writing style of the G3 DVDs.

I wonder what this darkness is. And where did it come from? And what does it have to lose from the ponies being together as one?

And G3 ponies don't have a wicked bone in their bodies. There's no way these ponies are in their right minds or know the full truth serving the dark.
Alex Warlorn chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
It's always been spring for the Breezies before? They don't recognize what winter is?

I thought Zipzee and co shared the same house.

outside their flowery home it was warm, even hot, and beautiful flowers dotted the landscape.

0-0

It's winter in Breezie Blossom but nowhere else?

As far back as I can remember

How far is that?

"What's winter," Zipzee interrupted.

0-0

They've never visited Ponyville during the winter?

Rainbow Dash stepped forward with a toss of her mane. "Allow me to explain!"

Rainbow Dash stepped forward with a toss of her mane. "Allow me to explain darlings!"

"May I continue?"

"May I continue darling?"

"I'll, like, get the biggest mirror I can find. If I can reflect the light towards their home, maybe that can help warm up Breezie Blossom," Sunny Daze said with confidence.

THAT IS SO a G3 Pony's way of thinking!
:-)

I LOVE how you get the quirks of the G3 ponies (and dragon) spot on!

"And we all know who loves stories," Minty said. "There are two ponies who do!

Cotton Candy know stories.
As does Earth Pony Cheerilee.

Starsong, Sweetie Belle, Cheerilee, Scootaloo, Toola Roola, and Whimsey Weatherbe all nodded.

0-0 *look of absolute horror* What is going on?

I think I finally appreciate what MY readers felt when I wrote the G3 Apocalypse on Deviantart. . . .
Paradise the Librarian chapter 9 . 8/22/2013
Awww, that was a cute and very G3-ish way of solving the problem! Here's hoping they can use similar means to free the others!
zaeva chapter 9 . 8/22/2013
And once again Pinkie Pie save 3 kingdoms with her friendship, leadership and her Pinkie squink. Now she is ready to fight the big boss.

That is if you going to put it. Nice story loving it.
Paradise the Librarian chapter 7 . 8/21/2013
Oh no! I hope they can free butterfly island!
Paradise the Librarian chapter 4 . 8/21/2013
3.5 are the bad guys! Awesome! But who is controlling them?
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