McCoy huffs. "Not in the least. You should hear the rumours. At this point, you've probably taken out the whole crew of pirates, boarded the enemy ship, brought about universal peace and sailed away into the sunset, all of which without the use of your legs."

What sunset? You're in space! Great chapter!

I know that it's been a very long time since you published this story,
But I just wanted to let you know that this is incredible.
I can't explain how much I love this story.
The way you portrayed both Kirk and Khan is extremely well done
And true to themselves.

I love this whole story the plot bunny's really worked for you on this one. Its amazing how you worked all the science into this and stuck with the story line for the show in some ways. I loved it. Wish you had more to this so I could keep enjoying it.

Best Jim/Khan fanfic EVER! I've been desperately searching for a good one and this is just perfect! It was a wonderful, sweet build to an understanding, encouraging, HOT relationship with a future :D I loved it, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for sharing it :D

Great fic with great ending.

Great fic. Interesting insight into what caused Khan's savagery.

Oh...wow. This is the best Trek fanfic I've ever read, and I've read my fair share . I'm not even exaggerating — this is beautiful. Thank you so much. I'd really wanted to find a good Kirk/Khan story, and this exceeded whatever expectations I'd had. Is there a way that this could be, like, published somehow? I know some writers have gotten book-length stories published for Kindle and things like that, and I very much want this sort of thing to happen for stories as good as this; I'd gladly pay to have this as an ebook or something.

This was wonderful, especially the dialogue, which, to me, seemed very much in-character for especially Spock and Khan. I am a big fan. Thanks again.

-Michaela M.

Oh, my. I love the Kirk/Khan pairing. The emotions that James brings out in Khan and his other crew members. Sexy as well. Love the story.

That was a really good story. I loved the build up of the relationship and how Khan had to overcome his past.

THAT WAS AMAZING! I LOVED EVERY PART OF IT

just found your story and I loved it!

I loved it. It was a wonderful story.

I read this all in one go because I've been on a Khan/Kirk kick (ahhhh puns) for a while now and I just have to say...this is beautiful! I really like the budding friendship, the plotline, and how you did everything. This was really cute and had a great story to it, even a lot of feels, so kuods!

I would just like for you to know that I have enjoyed this story immensely through out the time ive been reading it and thought it wise to tell you I have enjoyed this story as much.

That was actually the least awkwardly written romance (total roses, not smut) I've ever read. And it was...and in interesting story, without the romance.

I think if you rehashed it, made it your own, that it wouldn't do badly on the market.

That was a real treat. Thank you for taking time to write it and share it with everyone.

- M