Tali is very much not lois lane esque what your describing are superficial similarities, not actual personality traits

This idea has potential, but the implementation could really use some work. For example:

"They hid pod in a secret place beneath the barn, a place so secret that the most advanced scanners couldn't find it, due to the defenses they put into place."

This has a very "Take my word for it" quality that cheapens the story. It's just unbelievably convenient that two nobodies *happen* to have a way to shield something from the most advanced scanners well-funded military R&D can come up with. A better solution would be to explicitly say that they built some Kryptonian technology that Braniac gave them designs for.

Thanks for the chapter and good luck!

While I'm pretty sure you've gone with a Tali pairing, I would have loved to see Samara. Not many of those on here, at least in the crossover section. I like the story concept, pretty unique. The execution's alright; I've seen better, but I've also seen much worse. Cam't offer much advise I'm afraid.
I await more, as always.

good to see this story back, very surprising when I saw the update. keep up the good work, can't wait for Superman/Shepard beat up Seran.

You seem to be obsessed with rape. 4 counts in 3 chapters, that's a bit much.

earlier, in chapter 2: farmer turned soldier you had clark able to hear his parents fighting as well as his mother whispering to him from the farm while he was at the school. what i want to know is what excuse was there for him to not keep track of nihlus with his hearing when the geth were involved, seeing as they are an unknown foe. don't get me wrong, I'm enjoying this story but the inconsistency at which he uses his powers to keep a look out for his allies almost makes it seem like he loses them and regains them just so the story follows the original as much as possible.

i was wondering, what happened to the heat sink tech. the guns should all be using the method of near infinite rounds with the problem of overheating from the game. checking the codex of the weapons mentions they shave a small piece off and launch it at high velocity. at least i think that is how it worked, been years since i played the first one

So glad for the updates! More soon please.

Great job on this chapter!

Honestly I’m just glad you’re back. I actually forgot about the story until I got the notice.

holy shit, you're alive. I thought you killed this story.

I have nothing bad to say but I think it would make more of an impact if Shepard ditched the guns and Armor and accepted his kryptonian self.

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Well, how were there reapers in the galaxy to destroy a race when the cycle has not begun? It would be more belivable if the Kryptonians were a species of a previous cycle and Kal-El was sent at the end of extermination 50K years prior to ME timeline. Thus was overlooked by retreating Reapers as a insignificant threat, for what machine could think that one being from a race could pose a threat. Much more belivable would be that he mingled with primitive humans becoming their godly emperor that has power over the sun and grants knowledge(immortality thanks to frequent trips toward the sun and so on for him would be belivable) or he could mingle with primitive asari. Yet here we read about reapers behaving strange and not to their sheldue, would it be logicl for Reapers to thro their timetable that they were using for countless eons to reap one species ahead of sheldue, even more rather than reap totally exterminate them?

like everyone else has said krypton being wiped out by the reapers Is nigh impossible krypton as a race is older than them better tech and if an alien invasion occurs I believe more than 1 person would survive due to having enough time to escape the planet the reapers triggering the planets already coming explosion is a much better explanations.