Reviews for Sibling Jealousy |
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kerana chapter 16 . 1/2 it is very let simba and mufasa and all the others return! |
Anonymous chapter 27 . 9/21/2019 I love a good TLK story. I love how you kept Mufasa alive and added a handful of characters. I didn’t expect for Nala’s parents to be the allies but that was an interesting plot twist. The way you wrote it, made me really into it. Thanks! Love the story! Keep up the good work |
Blizzard In Autumn chapter 1 . 8/15/2019 Nice fic |
Guest chapter 27 . 5/4/2018 This was amazing! Great job |
Clarissa chapter 27 . 10/3/2016 This story was so good I was shocked about sarafina and runju I hope in your next one they don't turn bad along with akila and that akila and Maliaka don't split up. I like your stories but they're all really similar especially the situation with shinda shani tojo kudeka hariku Zuri and Anjani I feel like if you want to make your next stories more interesting then you need to change up the situations. Ok thanks I can't wait to read more I hope you take some of my advice and I'll review on your other stories bye. |
CandyLuv99 chapter 8 . 6/27/2016 If your gonna kill off everybody that is loyal to Simba and Nala then you should just kill off almost the whole pride of pridelanders. |
No-one chapter 5 . 1/13/2016 AWWWW! I don't think that would actually happen, but it's adorable! |
Ponderella chapter 16 . 12/6/2015 You made damsels in distress |
Ponderella chapter 4 . 12/6/2015 Love the story but your a little inaccurate to the response to a threat to the pride. The females would be the ones to hunt and protect the pride, the males usually aren't involved. |
Bluehusky chapter 27 . 7/24/2015 This fanfiction was pawsome as you can see I a HUGE fan of The Lion King I like every thing that has to do with the lion king and I am very excited of the future of it and I Appreciate your work so good luck and thank you |
Guest chapter 8 . 5/29/2015 girls |
FaryLamMoon chapter 6 . 5/29/2015 guaaauuu let's gooo |
alyssa aka lissy chapter 24 . 12/26/2014 yes i was surprised to find out who the allies were. |
alyssa aka lissy chapter 12 . 12/26/2014 one of the people who wanted to be the god parent's |
alyssa aka lissy chapter 10 . 12/26/2014 they ask nala sister to carry the cubs because nala broke her ribs and so nala sister does it and turns on her mate. and simbe fights his brother. bam that what I think is going to happen. |