Reviews for Turn Back Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is only fan fiction and shouldnt be taken too seriously but just an FYI if Jane and Maura are really distant relatives then any romantic relationship would still be considered incest from what I've been able to figure out since I'm not from the USA and dont understand the laws completely. This is an enjoyable story and im looking forward to seeing what happens since it looks like Maura is going to be in Jane's time permanently I think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 24 chapters to go so I dont think anyone is dying any time soon. It would be really interesting to see Maura's reaction if she had took out her phone and took a picture of them together |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm looking forward to see what happens when Maura meets Frost. How will someone from the 1900's react to a black man? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It would be really interesting to see how Frost is treated if he were ever to go back with Jane because he's african american. I'm not from the usa so dont know for certain but i would imagine that the black community still had things pretty bad back in the early 1900's not that its all that much better in the 21st century mind you. |
![]() ![]() Time travel is a complex and confusing subject. Congratulations on a brilliant story. |
![]() ![]() Why has nobody else disovred the pipe? |
![]() ![]() Is MAURA an ISLES or a DOYLE? |
![]() ![]() Every now and then, i'm returning to this story and every single time, it is nice to read it. Thank you! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read your story, all I can say is AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really fantastic story. Coudn't stop after i bega. Thank yo for it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found your story and spent all night reading it. Wow... I know more than two years after your last chapter is such a long time to consider writing a sequel but who knows? It would be such a nice Christmas gift. |
![]() ![]() Hi I found your story yesterday and I have been reading all night. I had a great time and I really liked your story :-) I am always amazed when writers have such a great imagination to write time travelling stories with paradoxons that sound 'logical' Thank you for writing and sharing your story with us and to bad there are not more stories from you Ps my mother tongue isn't English... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the concept of this story, it was fun to read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just thought I'd drop you a note... this is the third time I've read this story. I love it every time. Other than a couple of little typos that I spotted here and there throughout the entire thing... (maybe 3 or 4 total mostly he instead of she etc) it's perfectly written... it's original and a breath of completely fresh air. I love how you've found the voices of both ladies and frost. I love coming back and visiting this world you've created! Thanks for sharing your gift! I hope you decide to tell Connie's story one day! |
![]() ![]() From the beginning I was really not enjoying the story much...I kept reading because I wanted to see where it was going. Throughout the whole story I kept thinking that maybe Jane had been injured and in a coma and this was a dreamscape thing and everything would be back to normal when she awoke from the coma...I think then I would have liked this story...but since it stayed in the sci-fi mode, I kinda of think I wasted my time...It was interesting to a point but just not to my liking! Sorry! |