Please pick this up! You have a wonderful plot here, great writing and I'm addicted! Argh! I need to know what comes next. Too good not to finish. Thanks for sharing your talent and creativity.

Please Please say there's some more of this? It's just its utter;y amazing and I want to hear Diane's reaction and Zach and Grace bonding with Will! And the baby of course! Pretty please!

Aahhhh I wish there was more so much!

Update please! Please...

more please!

good chapter once again. The cravings and getting up in the middle of the night to eat, that was funny. :) And them telling Diane and Peter...Well, that was needed. So now they can move on together.

more please! liking it!is it bad if i wished Peter would't give up too easily? make it a bit hard/impossible for A&W to be together?

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well that was awkward. Haha. Meeting Grace for the first time with no shirt on hahahaha very nice. But I'm glad she came around a little in the end.

Poor Will and Alicia! What terrible way to start a family dinner. I loved it, very good how Will held his own. And I'm glad Grace is warming up to him. How could you not warm up to Will?

You revealed Will's real "COOL" side in this chapter filled with big and little human hurdles.
Your thoughts and words had him not only reach out a mindful connection to Grace, but also at the same time provided her a smooth and logical pathway guiding her to be with her own best self. All those detailed informative traits needed by a lawyer so aptly provided the depersonalized wrapping Grace needed to defuse and to become gracious. How extremely well you designed respect and character bonding for Will to have a more even keel during this dinner first meeting. This, this is so IC Will, so denoting of one of his own greatness traits-to see a need, define it with that silver tongue, rapidly in the moment, and thus enabling others' lightbulbs to go off. I love how you have Alicia feeling a security with Will now since so many other facets in her life are under stress.
Your plot direction seems to provide Alicia the opportunity to discern a harmony of body, mind, and spirit mostly foreign in the GW story so far. I love your story and thank you for creating a light at the end of the tunnel yet to come sense for Alicia.

I am loving this story, and I know everyone can't wait till she tells Peter but I really can't wait for will to tell Diane. Next chapter soon please!

"We don't need any nursery rhymes. We'll read it to the Georgetown Law Journal. That'll put it to sleep right away" AHAHAHAAHA! wanting to breed the newest generation of lawyer already? haha! brilliant!

Another really great chapter. Can't wait till she tells Peter!

One thing that appeared to me - you keep switching tenses. I don't know if you do that for a reason but I've been taught it's "bad style" LOL! It's not super bad or something - it just stood out to me a bit. Anyway please keep up the fantastic story and update soon!

aww haha yes Will knows nothing of babies so far so it's only normal he'd freak a little. He's taking the whole thing super good given the circumstances. :D I'll quickly run and read the 5th chapter now so I'm up to date...

"He'd knocked up his employee. Who was the wife of the State's Attorney. Who had him under investigation." HAHA! Well put like that it REALLY sounds SO bad! haha! But yeah, messed up situation...

Such a great chapter again! Love Will's closing arguments. :-) And I think the "step-by-step" thing is kind of the best way to do this. So yeah... :D great job!