I love it! And I love what you've done with this series and can't wait to see where you take it!

Hope to read more soon..

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I promise I’m not trying to be rude, I just want to give some feedback that you may or may not decide to listen to. I feel that this story is basically just replacing Rose with Ashlee. I feel like if I wanted to see the original script I would just watch the show. I’m not a writer by any means, but I can imagine that it isn’t easy making an OC character stand out amongst the literal hundreds of OCs on here, but the point, I would think, is to make them stand out and not be a carbon copy of the original. The Martha era of the story does get better since she has some original lines there and I will keep an eye out for this book in the future to see how you decide to change up the plot to fit in your OC. Best of luck.

This might be random but can u do fanfiction with charmed/tvd. That the power of three is caroline,bonnie, and elena their the charmed. The backstory is the witch, melinda warren has a premonition that in the future Three group of friends whose friendship is so strong that is basically Sisterhood will become the most powerful witches of all time they will be known as The Charmed Ones Caroline is like true she has telekinesis Bonnie's like Piper she has the power to freeze time and Elena is like Phoebe she has the power a premonition and the Book of Shadows is full of all the stuff it was from the original Charmed show like spells and different demons and vampire and all these monsters and fairies and all these different creatures and the Book of Shadows was see that buy all the Warren Family line just to prepare The Charmed Ones for one they get their powers and fight evil protect the innocent and Stefan can be a whitelighter like Leo so that him and Bonnie can get together get married have a kid together and their kid will be the most powerful magic being in all the world. Charmed ones are all so connected like for a backstory when they were kids they did this Blood Oath to always be friends forever sisters forever so they cut their hands enjoined the bond and their blood mixed in with each other when they did it as kids. They also inherit the manor from the original Charmed series when they are teenagers from Bonnie's grams who Caroline Bonnie and Elena all call Bonnie grams there grams too. I really hope you try this out I mean it's been in my head for so long that I've wanted somebody to do this story because I'm not a very good Storyteller but it's just an idea which I hope you take up

Sorry this may sound a bit rude but trust me i'm really not trying to be but is Ashlee going to get different dialog cause she's talking and acting almost the exact same way as Rose it may be because I'm in the early chapters of the story but it seems like she's just Rose under another name. I'm really liking the story so far it's really interesting and am going to binge the rest of the story to catch up.

Fantastic! Cannot wait to read more! Thank you so much for new chapter

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next part. Please update soon.

Very good cannot wait for next chapter

Please update soon this is really good.

Absolutely horrible. Don't bother writing fanfiction if you're literally just replacing the word Rose with Ashley, this isn't a fanfiction; It's a rewrite of the script. Seriously.

Another great chapter. I really can't wait to read the next one. Please update soon.

You really should re-read yourself before publishing. I just saw that the doctor used Rose's name when he was talking to Ashley.
Be careful, this kind of mistake can ruin an entire story and it proves that you don't completely rewrite the script but copy / paste. Suffice to say that I enjoy moderately.

Hope to read more soon.

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I think you need to reread your story because I’ve notice a lot of the characters calling Ashlee Rose instead of her name and it a bit distracting

I read the first two chapters and I can't but wonder: what's the point of this fic? Ashlee IS Rose. She does and even says the same things. That's beyond lazy writing and bores the reader to no end.