well, then.
excellent story. I shall hunt for the sequel once my mind stops reeling and feeling fuzzy

I know the mould problem. I had four sinus infections one after the other, two of which needed a doctor urgently, thanks to the dismal accommodation standards when I was at uni. Normally I'm pretty hardy, and I knew there was something wrong. Fortunately, after the last one it was the Christmas holidays and I could go home and recuperate. Wasn't the nest Christmas though

YESSS HP reference!

‘Scorch marks, undimmed by time’s movement grazed most walls.’
Holy HELL that is an amazing sentence! You are such a phenomenal writer thank you for blessing us with this fic

Legolas?
What are you doing?

Great story!

This is amazing story! I hope that there might be a sequel in the future but understand that it takes a ton of work. Anyway, congrats on writing a wonderful story :)

Damn. This got dark.

WOW THIS WHOLE BOOK WAS AMAZING! I read it all in one sitting! Please write a sequel! U left us with a cliffhanger!

Bilbo's supposed to be rather Took-ish when he's young. I was expecting him to do adventure together with Lyla as kids, though maybe less brave than her.

And while I want Bilbo to live (I really like Bilbo). If the story don't allow it, I wanted him to at least be shown that he is indeed a brave hobbit.
I mean, it seems strange that Bilbo died of fading(?) when he still have a sister, even though he survived being all alone in canon. I thought him dying from the wolf would work better. Oh well.

Super awesome! I loved it. :)

Well, that's the easiest way to shut a female up! You kiss them!

...nvmind...

...you killed off filo and kili... TTnTT

Oh yes! Now that wouldn't be a quote for something else would it? One of the best lines of the whole franchise! Another good chapter, well done!