After reading this story, i become your instant follower.
The best grayza fiction i ever read.

THAT WAS AMAZING! Although I do prefer dirtier lemons... so PLEASE PLEASE write an epilogue!

reads "this is not the fic for you!" as moving hand in a for matter to forget reading this as obi wan kenobi

I Love it

Though I don't ship them they were really cute together. And if not for the other pairings they could be a perfect couple, too. Great story!

Muy bueno te felicito
Me fascinó tu historia

I am very curios about what is going to happen next

Gray is so cute. Of Course he wanted to make it Special for Erza. He loves her after all

like that

LOL...it looked like bases of a relationship.

Kyaaaa!
Me encanta

Omg! I swear, I've already read this fic for about 3 or more times but it still gets me everytime! I love this story so much dang it! This is my fave Grayza story, I swear! Thank u for sharing this masterpiece :))

Well that was fun lol i would have to say this chapter is my fav cuz i loved how you incorporated the arguing scene between natsu and grey and grey stripping and erza's seduction amor, it felt like i was watching a episode of fairy tail lol i also liked your lemon bravo. i was happy grey didnt want to have sex with erza on the train but instead waited awww! i loved erza's terrifying moments like the train scene XD Many funny moments like when erza said she told grey to punish her by hitting her(reference from the show which i love) and when she punched grey in the face for getting cocky there at the end here hahaha. I think you nailed erza's personality, grey... he's a hard one to crack though i admit. its kinda hard to see him like this "i love you" and stuff but i wouldnt want him to change that cuz i love that he doesnt want to be a sexual hook up but rather be with erza fully. So from what i gather even though our couple here are "together" erza isnt totally there yet with saying "i do" anytime soon lol she no doubt likes grey but just isnt comfortable with being in love yet which i totally get and happy you didnt make her say it so another round of applause to you! oh and for the lemon, i was happy in how you took it, grey being gentle and taking the lead. I cant wait to see how the guild finds out about our couple here and yes juvia and jellal especially! well juvia always has lyon lol idk about jellal tho :/ i also want to see how grey and erza's realtionship progress. Ooo like how will their relationship affect them on jobs? we all know erza is the dominant one in the guild so how will this affect them as a couple and while in the bedroom? And oh yea a dirty lemon featuring erza being the one in control sounds promising! please make it!

More sex and crap like that

Loved the lucy comment