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I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and look forward to the sequel. I didn't read it at first because I tend to be a fan of only Edward and Bella HEA stories and this one appeared to not be going in that direction. You have now cleared this up so I can just sit back and look forward to the sequel.

it was an amazing story keep writing you have a great talent keep up the great work

Your grammar is horrible!

This is starting out really good, I just hope I can figure out all the details.

I just had a lot of fun reading this great story over the last few days. I really hope that you do continue with it. I would love to see what happens with the prophecy and her having Edwards children. It really was a great story.

Give us the sequel,we're ready for it. Good job.

Please continue your story. Love your story. Hang in there, you will get reviews soon.

Don't deleted your story please!

You infuriate me... How old are you? Read this yourself and hopefully you will see where i am coming from.

IsabellaElizabeth1864, you can confuse me as much as you want, as long at the end of the day Edward and Bella end up toghter.

I am guessing you are not finishing the story here. We all need to know what the hell is going to happen. I have a feeling (I could be wrong) that one of those babies are not Edwards. I have a feeling that one is Jacobs. and that is the baby that Avelina is talking about. But then again I could be thinking to far out of the box.

I would still like to help you with editing your story if you are up to it. I have a quick turn around usually 2 days at the longest. Let me know what you think.

Regards
Flora Mile

Loved the whole story can't wait for the sequel! Thanks for the story ! Sandy

loved it

I have mixed emotions with this chapter, I am not sure where this story is going, and I am not sure who Bella like anymore, because if she was Edwards true mate she would never have stepped out with Jacob. So I am not sure about why all of a sudden she needs Edward, she was perfectly happy with Jacob and asked about him to Avelina. So you are starting to get confusing with this story.

I love it so much and you have done such a great job, I can get over the spelling and grammar mistake for such and powerful, suck you in, grab you by the nuts story and this is what your story does to me, but when it starts to get confusing, I need to tell you.

Please take your time and explain a little better. So if the chapter ends up being a little longer or we have to wait a few more days. I would rather understand than be confused. Because this story is that good. If you would like, I would like to offer my beta skills, I am not the best but I can help you with most of the spelling and grammar mistake. If you are agreeable just send me a PM and I will be happy to discuss it with you.

Keep up the friggin excellent work. I cant wait till after Christmas.

okay, I am loving the story but this chapter really rode my goat.

Is she Edward mate or not? Because if she was Edward true mate he would not allow this to friggen happen. You are friggin killing me here and this kidnaping shit needs to stop, it is getting ridiculous. She has wolf looking after her, there is no way this would happen this many times.

There is no way the Charlie would let this happen this many times, once yes, twice maybe, but a third, no friggen way. He would have had that may people watching her ass, it would be like white on rice. Someone would be up her ass 24/7.

I understand it is fiction, but if you are going to do it, do it correct, no way in hell this would be going donw like this again.

Angry!