Please write more of this story soon.

I am a newly obsessed fan of 24, and think you are the best fan fiction writer I've seen thus far. I know it's been a couple of years, but can you finish your story? I'm guessing you are busy being a lawyer, but you really are great!

These are amazing...please have more chapters!

Hopefully there are more updates!

This is how it SHOULD have happened on the show! You should be a 24 writer.

Another good chapter you actually got me into this story even though its not all action and suspense. Audrey and Heller are two of my favorite characters besides Jack.

Wonderful couple chapters! I can't believe I actually liked Richard Heller in this story, I hated him on the real show and he was portrayed very negatively in my old story. But some trivia is that in my current story the actor who played Richard Heller plays the crazy former EPA agent who leads the rampage.

This is really good! I WISH this is what had happened between Audrey and her father but too bad its not really the case as Heller still doesn't trust Jack.

Great story, hope you update soon !

Great story to read , now that Audrey is back in Live Another Day.

wow this is a very good story has me bitting my nails lol... i want more! im addicted! hope to see another chapter soon!

Good one! Waitin yo see where all this is going. Keep up!

Another great chapter!

Yey, a new chapter! And a wonderful one! It was really worth the wait. Can’t wait for more!

Great chapter! can't wait 4 more!